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Wow I love this Ahavati!👏
Wonderful piece about a wonderful place im grateful to be apart of though I'm not present as much as I'd love to be du still feels like a part of me
and everyone here is quite amazing!
Great stuff as always!👏👏

Thank you, Hunter. I truly appreciate that and your presence here at DU.

I love the graphic and the poem is genius!

There is such a contrast in the very first line - "Modern day beatniks!" The image itself strikes a rebellious pose.  

It's such a fun play on words, even E.E. Cummings would be delighted.

❤📝

Thank you, Sweetie. ❤📝

Particularly for the cumming's reference. I adore him. xo

Your words have magnified my gratitude for DUP. Excellent write.



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buddhakitty.

Thank you, Honoria. Best compliment ever! xo

I guess that that says it....well

Thank you, DaDa! Much appreciated. xo

Brilliant.

Thank you, Lozzamus!

Thank you, Rose. Much appreciated ( and please return soon ). xo

Remindes me of a piece I wrote not so long ago, I guess this place is our second home

I would love to read the piece you are referring to!  And, you might want to enter it in Admin's 10th Anniversary comp!

...and the beat goes on! I think Mr. Ginsberg just bowed at your feet A. Great ink indeed.
Cheers...Harry

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Thank you, my friend! Much appreciated!

loved the cleverly inerspun juxtapositional metaphors in this my friend...poetics & the digital ..the space of du will extend till wordistic eternity & the digital will (de)grow until robotics & beyond, &  dunn know what..best for the comp. with a great entry :)

Thank you, my Sweet Friend! Truly appreciate you! xo

Ingenious Ahavati!

Although I found it awkward to read, because some lines needed to be kind of read twice (with and without the bracketed parts), the double meanings and interplay of the various parts made the poem all the more connected and satisfying to read.

I liked the two extremes: lovers and warriors.  Carbon bytes of poetry was good too.  Perhaps bringing to mind the link between carbon based beings and silicon based machine.  Yes ... I like that.  Especially as it ties in with the (un)bracketed  meanings.

Nice bit of alliteration at the end.  I do like a little alliteration.

SeaCat

Thank you, SeaCat!  Integrating organics and technology can be tricky! I appreciate your support.

Thank you, Skyblue2.  Much appreciated.