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stone circle
i)
the spirits if there were
did not want you
and i did not want them to
stargazer,
limitless
silly, dangerous man
serious and soft
surround me
with breathing air
i tried
ii)
the first comet we saw was the brightest thing i have seen. an orange burst of fire and a sound like quenching hot iron.
honesty is a trap
i do not like the inside of you
full of shit and conspiracy
i want granite i can touch
what have i done now
iii)
each tiny hole in the thin curtain over us sings its own note
if i could hear it clearly.
let's go home
the spirits if there were
did not want you
and i did not want them to
stargazer,
limitless
silly, dangerous man
serious and soft
surround me
with breathing air
i tried
ii)
the first comet we saw was the brightest thing i have seen. an orange burst of fire and a sound like quenching hot iron.
honesty is a trap
i do not like the inside of you
full of shit and conspiracy
i want granite i can touch
what have i done now
iii)
each tiny hole in the thin curtain over us sings its own note
if i could hear it clearly.
let's go home
Published 8th Aug 2019
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Ahh she grins at star-song; each note an ivory octave pricking the flat ebony spine of keys.
Why talk when you can just go home.
Why talk when you can just go home.
9th Aug 2019 11:31am
"honesty is a trap
i do not like the inside of you
full of shit and conspiracy" I found those lines quite relatable, fantastic piece. One for the RL.
i do not like the inside of you
full of shit and conspiracy" I found those lines quite relatable, fantastic piece. One for the RL.
13th Aug 2019 7:10am
hard harder hardest ..a choking in (ir)reversibility plunging in ..after all the (pre)dispositions & deep dents & the dreamy extensions to stay afloat...there's a destiny above all. the chorus of it all hits home in the listening . love your explorative minimalism n tearing in (in)decipherable truth. the title & stars & granite ..such heightened metaphorics. works absolute for me.
