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Your call cannot be completed as dialed
Waiting
Will I be remembered today
Will anyone think to see if I'm okay
No messages
No voicemails or missed calls
Nothing is all I've got so far
Drifting in and out of my mind
Trying my best to pass the time
Alone as always
Hey don't forget me
Said the ghost in my head
Eating away at me
S i. I. e. n. c. e
Too late to check
The lines gone dead
The ghost is gone
The girl hangs by her neck
Will I be remembered today
Will anyone think to see if I'm okay
No messages
No voicemails or missed calls
Nothing is all I've got so far
Drifting in and out of my mind
Trying my best to pass the time
Alone as always
Hey don't forget me
Said the ghost in my head
Eating away at me
S i. I. e. n. c. e
Too late to check
The lines gone dead
The ghost is gone
The girl hangs by her neck
Published 8th Aug 2019
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8th Aug 2019 8:24pm
Dear D,
The ache and void is so well spoken in this piece. Third stanza is beyond relatable to me. And “alone as always” sometimes even hashing stuff out with friends one feels so alone.
Beautifully done! H🌷
The ache and void is so well spoken in this piece. Third stanza is beyond relatable to me. And “alone as always” sometimes even hashing stuff out with friends one feels so alone.
Beautifully done! H🌷
