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Trivial
Nothing is significant
Not these words
Nor these sentences
Ashes and dust
Fleeting faster each day
Everything will fade away
Ashes and dust
Dissipating with each step
Searching for the myth of happiness
Ashes and dust
Nothing is significant
Nor should it be
Fleeting always
Fate is waiting
Ashes and dust
Published 8th Aug 2019
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8th Aug 2019 11:08am
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
8th Aug 2019 11:38am
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8th Aug 2019 12:26pm
8th Aug 2019 1:13pm
TRUE WORDS INDEED FROM LIFE TO DEATH FOR WE BECOME ASHES AND DUST NICE FLOW OF WORDS
8th Aug 2019 1:58pm
8th Aug 2019 3:29pm
Damn girl now im starting to wonder what my feedback is...
Is it significantly insignificant
or
insignificantly significant
or
relevantly irrelevant
or
irreverently reverent even prevalent
all i know
is i liked your verse it was relevantly significant and totally prevalent. xx
Is it significantly insignificant
or
insignificantly significant
or
relevantly irrelevant
or
irreverently reverent even prevalent
all i know
is i liked your verse it was relevantly significant and totally prevalent. xx
