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The pebble
resting for aeons on the beach -
when thrown into the sea -
caused ripples, too.
Published 6th Aug 2019
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7th Aug 2019 4:32am
everybody has a part to play ...
delightfully brief...
delivering a big message in a small way...hugs Ely
delightfully brief...
delivering a big message in a small way...hugs Ely
7th Aug 2019 8:26pm
Thank you. I feel particularly honoured by your kind comment, because it's one of my most personal poems so far. :-)
7th Aug 2019 8:49pm
:-)
It is indeed interesting to see how changing things after decades for a new challenge makes waves in the environment. ;-)
applepie77
It is indeed interesting to see how changing things after decades for a new challenge makes waves in the environment. ;-)
applepie77
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19th Aug 2019 9:28pm
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25th Aug 2019 11:20pm
26th Aug 2019 8:32pm
18th Sep 2019 7:23pm
there's a deep and residing truth in this write
any one of us are pebbles on life's beach, capable - with the right impetus - of making ripples
having said that, i find myself slightly distracted by the phrasing; feels a wee bit clunky though for the life of me i have no suggestions right now. maybe making ripples is enough, after all :)
any one of us are pebbles on life's beach, capable - with the right impetus - of making ripples
having said that, i find myself slightly distracted by the phrasing; feels a wee bit clunky though for the life of me i have no suggestions right now. maybe making ripples is enough, after all :)
24th Oct 2019 8:36pm
15th Dec 2019 7:49am
Impactful poem, pie, no wordplay intended. A beautiful and concise message... Thanks for sharing that with us :)
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