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Dripping Lips
Like a Butterflies Gravity she pulls me in
Leaving me at the point of no restraint
Our bodies intertwined and on fire
My mind consumed with desire
Luscious soft lips slightly open
Breathing gently on my neck
Nails running down my spine
Moans reverberating through my mind
No words switching positions with time
Arching her back as I pull her hair from behind
Passion dripping from constant motion
Continuously corking her ocean
Vibrating legs, rolled back eyes, she’s ready for an explosion
Is she screaming or moaning
Squirt after squirt her geyser continuously flowing
Blushing and breathing soft in fatigue
She gazes up at me innocently
I just smile kissing down her pulsating thighs
Tasting her love, burrowing my tongue deep inside
Leaving me at the point of no restraint
Our bodies intertwined and on fire
My mind consumed with desire
Luscious soft lips slightly open
Breathing gently on my neck
Nails running down my spine
Moans reverberating through my mind
No words switching positions with time
Arching her back as I pull her hair from behind
Passion dripping from constant motion
Continuously corking her ocean
Vibrating legs, rolled back eyes, she’s ready for an explosion
Is she screaming or moaning
Squirt after squirt her geyser continuously flowing
Blushing and breathing soft in fatigue
She gazes up at me innocently
I just smile kissing down her pulsating thighs
Tasting her love, burrowing my tongue deep inside
Published 14th Dec 2011
| Edited 15th Dec 2011
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15th Dec 2011 00:54am
15th Dec 2011 2:43am
Anonymous
15th Dec 2011 00:26am
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15th Dec 2011 1:32am
Dearest October :)
Was wondering when you were gonna get around to writing an erotic-- took you long enough iJoke :p.
@Dripping Love-- Dripping Lips* make it a pun; the word play works. Also it portrays it better. As in her lower lips are dripping as wells as your lips.
@pulsating thighs-- *quivering
'mi loike e'
[rubixcube]
Was wondering when you were gonna get around to writing an erotic-- took you long enough iJoke :p.
@Dripping Love-- Dripping Lips* make it a pun; the word play works. Also it portrays it better. As in her lower lips are dripping as wells as your lips.
@pulsating thighs-- *quivering
'mi loike e'
[rubixcube]
I enjoyed the pun and pulsating does make it sound better thankyou again and im glad you like :)
15th Dec 2011 2:40am
@drowning-- burrowing*
I would not expect anything less than more writes under this cate'!! [wink]
Yw!!
I would not expect anything less than more writes under this cate'!! [wink]
Yw!!
15th Dec 2011 5:38pm
..uhh?
..uhhhhh??
Die? LOL
Nah, im sure you'd find another (like Alip) to nudge you forward :p
..uhhhhh??
Die? LOL
Nah, im sure you'd find another (like Alip) to nudge you forward :p
15th Dec 2011 4:45am
That is HOT. I love how sensual it was. You were able to make it sexier then many poems that use the vulgarities. Very well done! I hope to see more erotica from you. ;)
15th Dec 2011 5:00am
I didn't want to use vulgarities, i feel like it takes out the beauty embedded within erotica. I hope to write more so be on the look out :p
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Dec 2011 5:30am
15th Dec 2011 5:28am
Mr October, sir...
What many erotica poets never seem to learn is that erotic is a beautiful expression of sexuality. Anybody can throw a bunch of crude words on a page, not everybody can build beautiful HOT imagery that lingers in the mind like the reality of the moment itself. You have done this well. You have remembered to be frank, raw and loving. Sexual, sensual and exciting.
Kudos for another wonderful write.
Al .
What many erotica poets never seem to learn is that erotic is a beautiful expression of sexuality. Anybody can throw a bunch of crude words on a page, not everybody can build beautiful HOT imagery that lingers in the mind like the reality of the moment itself. You have done this well. You have remembered to be frank, raw and loving. Sexual, sensual and exciting.
Kudos for another wonderful write.
Al .
15th Dec 2011 5:39am
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15th Dec 2011 6:34pm
Anonymous
21st Dec 2011 9:43pm
i'm just going to agree with all this lovely praise your getting super hot,sexy,sensual and great imagery indeed!
11th Jan 2012 9:18am
