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Searching Tongue
A Searching Tongue Can Be The Center Of The Universe. Something I Learned From Experience.
Published 31st Jul 2019
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Experience Is The Best Teacher.
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31st Jul 2019 2:24am
tongue as the center of he universe....whoa!!!
now there's a thought for the ages
now there's a thought for the ages
31st Jul 2019 2:27am
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
2nd Aug 2019 9:51am
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2nd Aug 2019 5:18pm
This is a very profound and engaging thought.
In the spirit of honest critique, not sure what form of electronic device you're using, e.g. - phone, computer, tablet, but I feel this would work much better as a couplet vs a single line. If you wanted to conjoin them, you could use a semi as I have done below. Thus the couplet is still intact as a singular line.
A Searching Tongue Can Be The Center Of The Universe;
something I Learned From Experience.
In the spirit of honest critique, not sure what form of electronic device you're using, e.g. - phone, computer, tablet, but I feel this would work much better as a couplet vs a single line. If you wanted to conjoin them, you could use a semi as I have done below. Thus the couplet is still intact as a singular line.
A Searching Tongue Can Be The Center Of The Universe;
something I Learned From Experience.
