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When It's Over...

Hi darling,

I drank another bottle of wine last night -
As thoughts quickly turned round to you again.
I was thinking back to those days, ways and words of yours.
It's funny how you managed to open my heart so completely,
It was as if your eyes were burning right into my very soul.
I don't know how you did that, I didn't think it was possible.

I was remembering, even so, seems long ago,
So long ago since I held you captive in my arms.
I thought about how we built each other up,
But I didn't realise until it was too late,
How damn sexy it all was, how we would play.
Batting that giant beach ball of intensity,
Back and forth across the net.
Time and again neither of us could win,
'Cos we were so damn eager to please one another.
Yes, our game often ended a draw!

Felt like dynamite back then -
Two different worlds exploding into one.
Remember, you were the thunder, I was the lightning,
You were the fire and I was the ice,
You were the pull, as I was the push,
You were the circle when I was the square.

I loved the mutual respect we'd hold,
With electricity and passion left untold.
When we had stuff to say,
Boy did we fuckin' say it, man!

Like I said, I've had some wine,
But my mind feels totally focused -
Although there's no logic in it.
There was a time I couldn't keep away,
We yearned so much, there was lots to say.
But I want you to know that you've been great,
And there will never be another like you again -
That's why I'm in tears, cryin' like a baby!
I realise it's over and that we're moving on -
Well, you are anyway!
So I'll just shut the fuck up then, ok?
'Cos I think it's what you would have wanted...
You, you damn sexy woman!

Thank you for loving me your way. x

(When it's over...that's what I will say)
Billy_Snagg
Written by Billy_Snagg (Snaggy)
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Author's Note
Inspired by a lady who occasionally visits DUP. 'When it's over...' is what I would imagine saying if it was over. Actually, it is over, it never really was. Got good vibes from her once though. :-)
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