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Re. Mi Deseo
Anonymous
24th Jul 2019 3:46pm
My oh my! Is good to be back 😘
Hot hot ink Mr. LI!
Hot hot ink Mr. LI!
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Re: Re. Mi Deseo
24th Jul 2019 4:24pm
Re. Mi Deseo
24th Jul 2019 4:16pm
Damn, your poetry can get even asexual people hot and bothered. This is a delicious masterpiece, and I love how you tease us with glimpses and leave the rest of it to our imagination.
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. Mi Deseo
24th Jul 2019 4:25pm
Re. Mi Deseo
24th Jul 2019 9:43pm
Favourite set of lines:
Thoughts of us not making love is insanity!
Memories of you consume me
Every time I reminisce over the times we’ve had
It’s like Eroticism of the mind
I take pleasure in the giving of orgasmic energy
I love when your body responds in kind
Thoughts of us not making love is insanity!
Memories of you consume me
Every time I reminisce over the times we’ve had
It’s like Eroticism of the mind
I take pleasure in the giving of orgasmic energy
I love when your body responds in kind
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Re. Mi Deseo
26th Jul 2019 1:07am
Good times... are always memorable !
A fine write, and love the visual ensemble; coupled with your gorgeous words.
A fine write, and love the visual ensemble; coupled with your gorgeous words.
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Re: Re. Mi Deseo
27th Jul 2019 4:20pm