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nidus
Ive heard the poets and romantics say
a simple kiss between lovers stops time
the end of my existence in this
fucking dispensation is draaaaaagging!
Your focus or iota of attention I miss
to the degree of aging, aging, old
death.
I want to pickle my neurons
create a nest of insects for small
animals and Faeries to bask
in the warmth of someones
nidus. . .
Maybe mine?
Not asking for a locus swarm of
infection within my organism shell
only a little demonstration
of love ~
or a kind word or 2
...
magick phenomenon.
a simple kiss between lovers stops time
the end of my existence in this
fucking dispensation is draaaaaagging!
Your focus or iota of attention I miss
to the degree of aging, aging, old
death.
I want to pickle my neurons
create a nest of insects for small
animals and Faeries to bask
in the warmth of someones
nidus. . .
Maybe mine?
Not asking for a locus swarm of
infection within my organism shell
only a little demonstration
of love ~
or a kind word or 2
...
magick phenomenon.
Published 24th Jul 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
24th Jul 2019 00:15am
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LOL - clever greet
Blessed be, Brother
It's what i've spilled in previous ink,
" it's always cryptic when we don't talk. "
appreciate the read and share
Blessed be, Brother
It's what i've spilled in previous ink,
" it's always cryptic when we don't talk. "
appreciate the read and share
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
24th Jul 2019 00:50am
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it's as if You are psychic, here
with Your comments!!
appreciate the kind praise
with Your comments!!
appreciate the kind praise
24th Jul 2019 1:02am
Not asking for a locus swarm of
infection within my organism shell
only a little demonstration
of love ~
or a kind word or 2
This hit me like a brick. I read it with a resounding, YES. (I mean, is it too much to ask?) Loved this poem 💜.
And as is becoming usual when I read your work, I learned a new word. Thank you for the new addition to my vocabulary 😉.
infection within my organism shell
only a little demonstration
of love ~
or a kind word or 2
This hit me like a brick. I read it with a resounding, YES. (I mean, is it too much to ask?) Loved this poem 💜.
And as is becoming usual when I read your work, I learned a new word. Thank you for the new addition to my vocabulary 😉.
25th Jul 2019 6:57pm
Love helping You to build vocabulary ; )
People often don't realize
what a Hi or seemingly small kind gesture
can do for others.
appreciate Your read, share and kind words
People often don't realize
what a Hi or seemingly small kind gesture
can do for others.
appreciate Your read, share and kind words
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
25th Jul 2019 3:22am
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25th Jul 2019 6:58pm
& soooooooooo truthful
thank You for the read and share
and
Honored for the RL add
thank You for the read and share
and
Honored for the RL add
Anonymous
30th Jul 2019 2:43pm
Man, this is as raw & perfect as it gets. Love the title, the message & the expression of it.
30th Jul 2019 8:56pm
me wearing my heart on the outside of my rib cage
again........
appreciate the read and share
thank You
again........
appreciate the read and share
thank You
3rd Aug 2019 6:07am
3rd Aug 2019 2:53pm
26th Aug 2019 9:39pm
You DONE did it again. Up on that RL wall of fame. (;
*GUN SHOTS*
I pickle my neurons too (especially) when it comes to your talents, Tallen.
Yours,
LostGirl
*GUN SHOTS*
I pickle my neurons too (especially) when it comes to your talents, Tallen.
Yours,
LostGirl
26th Aug 2019 9:47pm
Careful
You are gonna start making my face wet
and i hate that shit
especially when i've been touched emotionally.
Shockingly,
thankful for the kindness and praise and
HONORED for the RL add
You are gonna start making my face wet
and i hate that shit
especially when i've been touched emotionally.
Shockingly,
thankful for the kindness and praise and
HONORED for the RL add
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Sep 2019 10:45pm
30th Aug 2019 6:55pm
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30th Aug 2019 7:50pm
the share You leave with me is
incredibly exquisite, kind and intelligent
I love the way You word Your
expression and interpretation
Wow -- thank You
Honored for the RL add
incredibly exquisite, kind and intelligent
I love the way You word Your
expression and interpretation
Wow -- thank You
Honored for the RL add
