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Sky dancing beat
Such the floating passion upon her horizon
Makes this midnight jealous of her twilights
Chants her stanza amour in each star rising
Hither a poetic ship's moon to sail her night.
Published 20th Jul 2019
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24th Jul 2019 00:52am
The music does not match those precious lyrics.
The romantically epic lyrics does not fit that *elusive* music.
Jazz-Rock? ...
The romantically epic lyrics does not fit that *elusive* music.
Jazz-Rock? ...
Letters were written on the drumset... I was beating out the words...Ha!...I will attempt the more romantically elusive beat improvisation in the future...
I really appreciate the read and listen...
Grazie, my friend
Jeff
I really appreciate the read and listen...
Grazie, my friend
Jeff
You're welcome.
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The songlyrics are great...
...you should *insert* them into an atmosphere of bass vibes only...
Then go on playing the drums.
I hope you like my suggestion.
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The songlyrics are great...
...you should *insert* them into an atmosphere of bass vibes only...
Then go on playing the drums.
I hope you like my suggestion.
... ... ...
25th Aug 2019 4:45pm
This is so so amazing, especially with the drumming. Bravo Jeff!
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
29th Aug 2019 9:45am
