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A UNIQUE KIND OF LOVE
From the time we are born into this world of life we are loved from the first sign of our birth in the womb of our mother, for that is the true beginning the true process of what is a real mothers love as she prepares us for whats out there waiting within the world.
But as we grew from a baby to a child to an adult there are things in this life that we will have to learn for ourselves for we will make mistakes as we will get hurt, for we may even have scars from some love but through life it is a learning process to even learn to trust in a world that is cold but there is always your mother with her undying love to protect you from the storms of the world.
But as we grew from a baby to a child to an adult there are things in this life that we will have to learn for ourselves for we will make mistakes as we will get hurt, for we may even have scars from some love but through life it is a learning process to even learn to trust in a world that is cold but there is always your mother with her undying love to protect you from the storms of the world.
Author's Note
THERE ISN'T NOTHING BETTER THAN A MOTHERS LOVE WHEN THE WORLD BECOMES TO MUCH TO UNDERSTAND ALONE
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Re. A UNIQUE KIND OF LOVE
25th Jul 2019 1:43am
This is a beautiful and remarkable poem; it resonate its rich and depth of perception
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25th Jul 2019 11:09am
THANK YOU QUEEN I NEVER HAD A REAL MOTHER MY REAL MOTHER WAS A STRANGER TO ME GROWING UP AS A CHILD BUT I HAD MY GRANDMOTHER, WHO RAISED ME FOR I MISS HER DEARLY FOR SHE WAS AND HAS ALWAYS BEEN MY ROCK IN MY LIFE THIS WAS A DEDICATION TO HER AND ALL THE MOTHERS OF THE WORLD
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27th Jul 2019 11:55pm
It takes a village to raise a nation, and within that nation, may the hand that rocks the cradle rear this nation some great doctors, lawyers, scientists, and farmers with a specialty in acrgricultral, someone has to till that land, if we were to ever go back to how things once was, sowing, planting, and growing our own crops
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28th Jul 2019 00:48am
YOU ARE RIGHT ON ALL YOUR POINTS MADE FOR THAT IS HOW I REMEMBER IT GROWING UP BACK IN MY DAYS IN THE SOUTH AND IN NYC FAMILY WAS FAMILY THEN ONE FOR ALL
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28th Jul 2019 00:56am
The older days was truly the great days, from what I've been told by my nana. You did not have the technology, you work with your hands and your barter with your mouth, this techno generation tends to scare me, no one wants to think for themselves, you just press a computer key and it is the highway, to knowledge, do people even use dictionary any more, I do wonder, and yes I do still use mine...lol
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28th Jul 2019 1:36pm
I AGREE WITH YOU WHOLEHEARTLY THE WORLD THAT WE ONCE KNEW IS GONE TECHNOLOGY HAS TAKEN OVER IT HAS GOTTEN TO THE POINT WE HAVE BECOME LAZY AND ITS SAD I STILL USE MY DICTIONARY AND YOU RIGHT THE NEW GENERATION DON'T THINK NO MORE FOR THEMSELVES
Re. A UNIQUE KIND OF LOVE
28th Jul 2019 8:50pm
You are much older than I, so the things you may have seen, I have yet to experience, but for now, I am learning life as I go alone, thus far... what I have seen in this day and time, less love, more wickedness, and what was right is now considered wrong.. and thank you for responding.
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29th Jul 2019 1:51am
you right about the love its less now and very much more wicked and right is wrong yes i am much older but the things i had seen are just being repeated over its more now right in your face like hatred and racism yes life is a learning ground indeed QUEEN
Re. A UNIQUE KIND OF LOVE
29th Jul 2019 1:52pm
Teach me the ways of your old and I will learn for my ways for a better tomorrow, very informative and insightful by the way
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29th Jul 2019 6:27pm
i don't mine teaching for it is true the young learn from the old and the old can learn from the young an equal exchange of knowledge and wisdom
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29th Jul 2019 6:55pm
Okay, I got out my Dictionary, my Thesaurus, my legal pad, and ink pen; your willing pupil is awaiting these life lessons, and go slow, please, I do not write gainful knowledge too fast, it takes time to absorb to fully understand it....wink
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29th Jul 2019 9:48pm
LOL...OK WE WILL TAKE IT NICE AND SLOW (SMILE) LIKE THEY SAY IF YOU CAN TEACH ONE JUST IMAGINE YOU HAD A THOUSAND OF OPEN YOUNG MINDS YOUNG BOYS AND YOUNG GIRLS, WITH A TRUE THIRST AND HUNGER THAT CAN ABSORB THE KNOWLEDGE AND WISDOM FROM OUR ANCESTORS OUR ELDERS, THE LESSONS AND EXPERIENCE FROM THE PAST OF OUR TRUE EXISTENCES, FOR WE WERE KINGS AND QUEENS...SOLDIERS AND WARRIORS THE TRUE SURVIVERS OF LIFE THE CHOSEN ONES THE SUN CHILDREN'S...AMAS SHAMEL
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