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don't blame the clouds ..
moans it always rains
when he hangs the washing
on the line
I suggest he only does it
when it's fine ..
Published 18th Jul 2019
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18th Jul 2019 00:33am
LOL! I think it's waiting for him to myself! Nothing wrong with cloud fun, Paul!
18th Jul 2019 00:38am
18th Jul 2019 00:39am
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
18th Jul 2019 4:02am
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18th Jul 2019 1:15am
18th Jul 2019 5:28am
yes ..no overtaking the clouded greys ..just points back like a boomerang to clear off own's own greys ..
your tone is spot on as ever in the stark brevity..always see your poetry as quickly prolifically deriving from routine but delivering deeply indelible insights ...
your tone is spot on as ever in the stark brevity..always see your poetry as quickly prolifically deriving from routine but delivering deeply indelible insights ...
18th Jul 2019 4:10pm
18th Jul 2019 9:42pm
