too everyone

I prefer unusual spacing to make aspects like words or ideas stand out, however, thank you for your input. It is respected.


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buddhakitty.

I like the unusual spacing ... appreciate the originality of it ...

Hello LilDragonFly.  Thank you. It's been a while.  Good to hear from you.




buddhakitty.

I love the sentiment here, but am confused by the adverb too, which denotes excessive, and typically precedes a determiner ( i.e. - many ) for a modified adjective.  Did you mean 'to everyone' as in the salutation of a letter?  Or was the implication that there are just too many everyones?

Either way, I did enjoy the sentiment very much.

Too had the intent of meaning that there are too many people feeling ripped apart, used and/or abused and become lost to themselves. The "too" was intentional.
I relied upon the reader to make sense of it's use after reading the work. Good to hear from you as always .


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buddhakitty.