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Geometric Expectations
At a busy street corner
waiting for Greeks bearing gifts...
He, always, stands at corners
to avoid going in circles...
waiting for Greeks bearing gifts...
He, always, stands at corners
to avoid going in circles...
Published 14th Jul 2019
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14th Jul 2019 1:05pm
clever - I like clever - perhaps he should beware of the Greeks at the corners
14th Jul 2019 1:58pm
I personally warned him of Greek bears, but, you know characters... They just won't listen, it's their way, or, no way at all...:)
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
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24th Jul 2019 10:46am
For once i read the title as "geometric expressions" ...but as you put 'expectations' cut one right through in the waiting .. corner to avoid circles...clever poetry there as ev to you ..pithy n loaded with revelations ..dear adored Poet. Best for the comp!
