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The Girl You've Wrought
Some say that love must wait for wounds to heal;
But I quite like the burning when you press
Against my well-whipped ass; it makes me feel
The connection intensely; your caress
Is fortified when you apply the cane,
Which has harsh rendez-vous with my behind;
Well, every tingling spanking must ingrain
Freedom from soft convention, save the kind
That brings me to the core that you reserve,
Being a savant in assertive skills;
You will not halt proceedings: I'm the curve
That you will plane, so you refine the thrills
Of fucking to perfection longed for; sought,
So love intensifies the girl you've wrought.
But I quite like the burning when you press
Against my well-whipped ass; it makes me feel
The connection intensely; your caress
Is fortified when you apply the cane,
Which has harsh rendez-vous with my behind;
Well, every tingling spanking must ingrain
Freedom from soft convention, save the kind
That brings me to the core that you reserve,
Being a savant in assertive skills;
You will not halt proceedings: I'm the curve
That you will plane, so you refine the thrills
Of fucking to perfection longed for; sought,
So love intensifies the girl you've wrought.
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Re. The Girl You've Wrought
13th Jul 2019 8:24pm
You found my big button! This is my favorite of yours. "The curve that you plane." It doesn't get better than that. ;-)
John
John
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13th Jul 2019 10:10pm
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13th Jul 2019 10:14pm
Re. The Girl You've Wrought
13th Jul 2019 10:14pm
Thwack, thwack, Swish, loving the cane loving the sound of every hit arouses you in so many ways...……….
and as he takes you your body surrenders craving longing desiring wanting more.
Another master piece SweetOblivion
and as he takes you your body surrenders craving longing desiring wanting more.
Another master piece SweetOblivion
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I have my arousal and you yours - they are probably very different - smiles - but thank you too
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2019 10:18pm
Have you been very naughty? Lol
This one has given me an idea....
This one has given me an idea....
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13th Jul 2019 11:33pm
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2019 11:15am
Oh yeah!!!
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Re. The Girl You've Wrought
13th Jul 2019 10:25pm
Oh wow, loooove!
“But I quite like the burning when you press
Against my well-whipped ass; it makes me feel
The connection intensely”
Yessss🙌🏼
“But I quite like the burning when you press
Against my well-whipped ass; it makes me feel
The connection intensely”
Yessss🙌🏼
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13th Jul 2019 11:35pm
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26th Jul 2019 7:10am
Forging allows real feeling and sense to have a strong under current to pin down need and desire