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What is
What's a loser
What's a winner
What's a leader
What's a sinner..
No such thing,
terms for beginners
for the beings who wish to banish
the believers who belong outside the boundaries, it's quite confounding
the confusion which clouded the centuries, we never payed attention
to the silent symphonies meant to seduce us, to steer us away from
the self inflicted agony and the anger alienating everyone, no connection.
What's a purpose
What's perfection
What's poetry
What's peace
What's this piece even proposing..
What's a winner
What's a leader
What's a sinner..
No such thing,
terms for beginners
for the beings who wish to banish
the believers who belong outside the boundaries, it's quite confounding
the confusion which clouded the centuries, we never payed attention
to the silent symphonies meant to seduce us, to steer us away from
the self inflicted agony and the anger alienating everyone, no connection.
What's a purpose
What's perfection
What's poetry
What's peace
What's this piece even proposing..
Published 13th Jul 2019
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You just described every bowl I've ever smoked, lol! The questions start me off in delighted wonder. Then as my enlightenment evaporates along with the high, I get frustrated because only my questions remain. This ink parallels that in a way in my weird mind. On my first read I think of getting philosophical with MJ. The second read makes me see the depth of your content. While the third read reveals the delicate evolution that connects your first question to your last. That makes this not just poetry but good poetry. Relatable on different levels.
-Minxy
-Minxy
13th Jul 2019 11:05pm
