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Wanting You So Bad....
I want you so bad.....
….can't even put it into words
don't know how to come to grips
with these feelings that I have
each and everyday
opens with a thought,
a dream
your image in my head
something about your presence
makes me just want to hold you
in my arms for all times
fulfill your dreams,
right all the wrongs
give you rest my beautiful wildflower
shelter you from
the “arrows by day”,
the “terrors by night”
loving you......forever
and I want you so bad
I don't know how to say it
don't want this feeling to ever end
cherishing the moment
when you called me:
“favorite teacher”, “father”,
“big brother” and “friend” !!!
a very genuine affinity
between you and I
but in “the lonely hours”
you have become one helluva woman
and I've come to realize that
your essence
brings out the true essence
of the man in me
without you, it's
getting “harder and harder to breathe”
the whole, unadulterated truth
my heart just won't lie....."I need you"
….my soul wants you so bad
so.......baby
“it's an evil wind that blows no good
and it's a sad heart that won't be loved
like it should
oh how lonesome you must be
and it's a shame
if you don't share your love with me.....”
I want you so bad
Published 13th Jul 2019
Author's Note
....references that influenced these melancholy words:
"Share Your Love With Me" Aretha Franklin
"When I'm Gone" Brian McKnight
"My Heart Won't Lie" Anita Baker
"Share Your Love With Me" Aretha Franklin
"When I'm Gone" Brian McKnight
"My Heart Won't Lie" Anita Baker
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13th Jul 2019 1:41pm
I’m loving the easy flow of this. Reads as a whispered on a warm southern breeze.
Bien echo querido 😘
Bien echo querido 😘
14th Jul 2019 3:46pm
The hope of tomorrow paired with the urgency of the present! Stellar as usual.
7th Nov 2019 11:48pm
Enjoyable to read. I love the tone, soft and gentle. Feels as if the writer is talking to the reader. Or maybe your piece has the right content "she" wishes .
