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YOU BECAME MY PEACE
Here I am sitting down by the waters edge just watching the sunrise over the horizon as I inhale and exhale the fresh summer air that flows with each breeze of the southern winds as I look as far as my eyes can see, but it is here at this moment within time that my mind travels through my silent thoughts of my mind, as an image of you seems to appear upon the the calm waters floating with each silent ripple of the movement as I see your face staring up back at me with a lovely smile.
For how much I wish that you were here with me so that I could hold and embrace you deep within these strong arms of mine as I look deep into your eyes that shines like stars, up in the nightly skies for as I sit here upon the waters edge wishing for a miracle to come true for me to have you here to see what I see and feel deep down within me the love that you poured into me.
For how much you've changed me from the man I use to be for I grew to fall in love with you as you have become my tranquil waters edge that brought, peace to my mind and life for its because of you I can feel love again within the core of my heart and the depth of my soul opening up my mind to a whole new world and life.
For how much I wish that you were here with me so that I could hold and embrace you deep within these strong arms of mine as I look deep into your eyes that shines like stars, up in the nightly skies for as I sit here upon the waters edge wishing for a miracle to come true for me to have you here to see what I see and feel deep down within me the love that you poured into me.
For how much you've changed me from the man I use to be for I grew to fall in love with you as you have become my tranquil waters edge that brought, peace to my mind and life for its because of you I can feel love again within the core of my heart and the depth of my soul opening up my mind to a whole new world and life.
Published 11th Jul 2019
Author's Note
WITHIN A WORLD THAT IS ALWAYS CHANGING ITS BEAUTIFUL TO FIND A RARE AND BEAUTIFUL SOUL
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11th Jul 2019 12:59pm
11th Jul 2019 3:43pm
Thank you for I write from my heart the things i don't speak upon from my mind about love and life the trails and tribulations that I endure in my life for they say experience is the best teacher of lessons learned for in order to know them oneself one must experience the journey and walk and struggle
Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 5:31pm
It's always nice to have that beautiful soul atleast once in life. Beautiful words of apprecation of one that has graced your soul.
For some memories aren't curses they are blessings to remind us what real love feels like and looks like from the visions of your own eyes to the depth of your mind, and the deepness of your spiritual soul to the silent echos that still speaks to your heart for a rare love still exist it just changes the outside shell as in body and soul face and mind and smile but the heart is still the same.
Anonymous
15th Jul 2019 4:17pm
Couldn't have said it better, King.
15th Jul 2019 5:05pm
Thank you QUEEN and i am glad everything is working out for you and your grand daughter it makes my heart smile and soul feels good one love always STONEY BAY
Anonymous
18th Jul 2019 6:40am
Thank you for the encouragement to reunite her with me, cause it was more than a notion to forgive her parents to be able to give her the love she needed. Much love always, CHYNA BAY
18th Jul 2019 8:29am
sometimes i see what others don't see for seeing here with you reminds me of being raised by my own grandmother for i too needed that love and guildes when i was growing up confused and unwanted and lost in the seas of the world i am just glad that you saw it too
Anonymous
18th Jul 2019 9:17pm
Thank you again for the wonderful complement, for you have restored the love that I once had from a man that I thought I would never see again. As I told you before, God gave me the gift to see beyond the flesh are see the soul. My grandfather told me that long ago, it could be why my mom was jealousy of me. I can only be what and who I am by the grace of God.
18th Jul 2019 10:57pm
YOU ARE WELCOME QUEEN FOR LIKE I ALWAYS SAID THERE ARE SOME MEN'S LIKE ME FOR WE ARE A RARE DYING BREED THAT MOST WOMEN'S WOULDN'T GIVE US THE TIME OF DAY FOR THERE IS MORE TO US ONLY IF SOME WOMEN'S WILL JUST TAKE THE TIME FOR I LIKE CAN ONLY BE WHO I AM CAUSE OF THE WAY I WAS RAISE BY MY GRANDPARENTS THANK GOD FOR GRANDPARENTS WHO TOOK THE TIME TO RAISE THERE GRAND KIDS RIGHT YOU INCLUDED QUEEN MY DEAR FRIEND (SMILE)
Anonymous
19th Jul 2019 3:15am
Thanks for that, Friend. I now no that there are men still out there that value women's mind an appreciate her for the woman she is. We are slowing going back to the "Big Mom" generation, except the parents are not appreciating what we do for our grand children & the support we give them. Be Bless My Friend.
19th Jul 2019 8:41am
you are so right about the parents some are so ungreatful its a shame and yes the old ways are coming back were grandparents are raising grand kids again for i don't know if the parents are completely on drugs or what but they need to grow up and get some sense and get there selves together for there kids
Anonymous
21st Jul 2019 5:15am
It's sad, but true. Drugs have some to do with it, but I believe the desire to want material things have cloud their minds so that they forgot the children's need for their simple love & time. I do understand that with economy it would take 2 incomes household to enjoy a comfortable living, but they have forgotten the simple need of the children. Then it's the need to post all your business on social media. They spend more time being liked. The children suffer for lack of attention to them, so when they get older, the repeat the circle only more intense. But this is the world we live in today & responsible grandparents have to step in.
21st Jul 2019 7:27am
YOU ARE SO RIGHT ON ALL YOUR POINTS AND ITS SAD FOR SOME FOLKS WHO ARE SUPPOSE TO BE GROWN FOLKS SHOULDN'T BRING CHILDREN'S INTO THE WORLD, WHEN THEY HAVEN'T GROWN UP YET THEMSELVES BUT THANK GOD FOR STABLE GRANDPARENTS WHO WANT NOTHING BUT A GOOD LIFE FOR THERE GRAND CHILDREN'S LIKE YOU AND MY GRANDPARENTS THAT RAISED ME
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2019 4:32am
Agree whole heartily, King. Be Blessed.
