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AS THE SEA DOES THE SHORE (INSPIRED BY PANDORA)
Like a mermaid I swoon,
before you, my Neptune,
my rough king of the sea
as you make love to me.
My back side on the sand,
I'm putty in your hand,
you over my bare skin,
permeating within.
As the sea does the shore,
so you batter my core
as you ebb forth and back,
press home your love attack.
My inlet is washed out
with my juice and the spout
of your oncoming stream -
stuff of my wettest dream!
before you, my Neptune,
my rough king of the sea
as you make love to me.
My back side on the sand,
I'm putty in your hand,
you over my bare skin,
permeating within.
As the sea does the shore,
so you batter my core
as you ebb forth and back,
press home your love attack.
My inlet is washed out
with my juice and the spout
of your oncoming stream -
stuff of my wettest dream!
Published 11th Jul 2019
| Edited 8th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by Pandora Unleashed's poem of that title. Accompanying picture from Wikipedia is William-Adolphe Bougereau's painting, The Wave (1896).
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Jul 2019 5:21pm
Anonymous
13th Jul 2019 2:32am
Good piece...not "oversold"...good premise, too! Even though I'm not much for rhymes, I liked your treatment.
18th Jul 2019 00:39am
Awesome write, Solomon! I especially loved...."As the sea does the shore,
so you batter my core
as you ebb forth and back,
press home your love attack. "
I'm giggling, as I call cum batter too.😁👌
so you batter my core
as you ebb forth and back,
press home your love attack. "
I'm giggling, as I call cum batter too.😁👌
8th Jul 2020 10:26am
As an illustration I have added a painting from Wikipedia I only discovered this morning.
18th Sep 2021 4:24pm
Oh yes! to make him your king, your god, and be taken in completely by the rough passions of the sea of feelings fulfilling all desires. "As the sea does the shore, so you batter my core, so you ebb forth and back" such beautiful imagery with a perfect rhyming flow. I am so glad you pointed this gem out to me.
