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As The Sea Does The Shore.....
The sea lays claim to its adjacent stone and grit, while both anchor and submit.
No matter the force, it takes what it wishes, but each thrusting tide also replenishes.
It not only makes amiable love to the shore, it fucks without restraint or consent.
Such polar opposites, but I hunger with ferocity, for the sea of you, in both realms.
The ebb and flow of your body clinging to my every contour and fiber.
Harnessed by the surge of your impetuous swell within, as we sing at sonic sound.
Impulsively taking me into the undertow, as I drown in your swift currents.
Forcing me to surrender; tethered and at the mercy of your haste momentum.
Annihilating me as we greet like riptides at high velocity, quaking us into a lathered form of one.
With my own waters tenderly parted before you, I don't merely ask, but I plead.....
.....As if holy water; with both ardor and rage, worship and renew me as the sea does the shore.
Published 11th Jul 2019
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11th Jul 2019 00:46am
11th Jul 2019 2:42am
11th Jul 2019 00:55am
11th Jul 2019 2:45am
Thank you, D...I'm still kicking, so I guess I'll take that. 🙄 I'm grateful you were found it enjoyable..thank you!
11th Jul 2019 00:56am
11th Jul 2019 2:50am
Thank you, lov
I'm so glad you liked it & especially that you stopped by. It warms my heart, truly!🌷
I'm so glad you liked it & especially that you stopped by. It warms my heart, truly!🌷
11th Jul 2019 1:02am
Another deeply sensual erotic master piece Pandora, mother nature integrated into human nature when two souls merge, beautiful...
11th Jul 2019 2:58am
I love weaving in some of nature's beauty...especially the ocean or moon. Thanks again for your kindness!...
11th Jul 2019 1:23am
11th Jul 2019 3:05am
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11th Jul 2019 1:24am
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11th Jul 2019 3:08am
Thank you, buddy...I'm so stoked for a great review ! I totally agree with you about the passion too...sigh; we're kind of forced, in some ways, to feel more deeply & it can be overwhelming!
Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 2:39am
Absolutely gorgeous ink !!!!!
11th Jul 2019 3:09am
Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 8:51am
I appreciate that immensely
11th Jul 2019 3:29am
18th Jul 2019 00:32am
11th Jul 2019 4:04am
Echo Lestaat69. Like the merging of tidal metaphors into the poem (could imagine a woman standing/sitting in tide washing around her), especially my favourite lines:
each thrusting tide also replenishes.
It not only makes amiable love to the shore, it fucks without restraint or consent.
The ebb and flow of your body clinging to my every contour and fiber.
Harnessed by the surge of your impetuous swell within, as we sing at sonic sound.
Impulsively taking me into the undertow, as I drown in your swift currents.
Overall would say the poem is 'tidal-primal'. Makes me want to go wading at my nearest nude beach! It has inspired my own rhyming poem, using the same title and on same theme.
each thrusting tide also replenishes.
It not only makes amiable love to the shore, it fucks without restraint or consent.
The ebb and flow of your body clinging to my every contour and fiber.
Harnessed by the surge of your impetuous swell within, as we sing at sonic sound.
Impulsively taking me into the undertow, as I drown in your swift currents.
Overall would say the poem is 'tidal-primal'. Makes me want to go wading at my nearest nude beach! It has inspired my own rhyming poem, using the same title and on same theme.
18th Jul 2019 00:35am
I'm humbled once again for an add, Solomon, as well as such a lovely compliment. Thank you..
I can't wait to go read yours, sorry I've been away sick..
I can't wait to go read yours, sorry I've been away sick..
18th Jul 2019 6:33am
25th Aug 2019 3:50pm
Heehe ..thank you. I've taken a couple breaks since then, but my mind is finally free. I think!
1st Sep 2019 8:13am
Just got back onto DUP myself after a forced absence over August caused by a now resolved password issue (my ISP for some reason rejected emails giving me new passwords). In the meantime I have had a day out on a nude beach, subject of my latest poem (in Self section).
3rd Sep 2019 8:59pm
Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 1:31pm
This is...I mean......I'm taking this one with me...
18th Jul 2019 00:37am
Thank you, for once again giving me a big smile for the add. I appreciate it, Willow, and just now seeing it!
Wow how this get pass me... this ink is absolutely brilliant and hot! Reminds me of the piece I made too called "The Ocean & The Shore" I post not too long ago hehe... it's a wonderful pleasure reading this awesome piece *hi5* :)
18th Jul 2019 7:14pm
Thank you so much, Magic..your wonderful comment & add made my day. I will definitely go back & look at yours considering my love of writes about the sex & the sea...
18th Jul 2019 6:29pm
beautiful Pandora I just love your erotic style
it is both otherworldly and of the elements
brought together a seductive work of art...
so damned sexy...
love you lady...
Brenda 🌹❤🌹
it is both otherworldly and of the elements
brought together a seductive work of art...
so damned sexy...
love you lady...
Brenda 🌹❤🌹
18th Jul 2019 7:17pm
Thank you, beautiful woman, for your gracious comment & add. Lot of love your way!❤
I love the theme. The swell of undulating waves definitely lends a sense of motion to sensual prose. I could almost hear, see and smell the salty sea dog of lust lapping against , and spilling his foaming white passion onto the warm open sands of longing.
Fantastic and Sensual writing Pandy! You have a unique way of bringing words to life.
Fantastic and Sensual writing Pandy! You have a unique way of bringing words to life.
3rd Sep 2019 4:56am
Dear goodness, forgive me for being so far behind..I swear I'm not an ungrateful person. I'm finally slimming my notifications down, that of others, not just mine. Thank you, David, for being so damn awesome to me! You rock!!!
3rd Sep 2019 8:26pm
No worries Pandy. I'll just sit here in the sulky corner ,. Sucking my thumb, vowing never to talk to you again!!! 😂😂😂
Silly girl Pandy! You know how much your input, and encouragement has inspired me to carry on writing.
No apologies....because you rocked a beached vessel that had hit the rocks, and pushed it out into an unknown ocean. You will always be the breath of fresh air that billowed my sails,, and swept me in the right direction. 😘
Silly girl Pandy! You know how much your input, and encouragement has inspired me to carry on writing.
No apologies....because you rocked a beached vessel that had hit the rocks, and pushed it out into an unknown ocean. You will always be the breath of fresh air that billowed my sails,, and swept me in the right direction. 😘
6th Sep 2019 10:38pm
Your metaphor harnesses the power of the sea which you encompass with your shore when high tide becomes the planetary force for your deepest pleasure. Fantastic my friend. John
