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Sorrow
Doth thou see
darkness’s inevitability?
Commeth ye who comprehend,
all that begins must come to an end.
Woeful and tasteless life
get thee behind me and my strife,
bothersome thou hath become
with tribulation and affliction.
Sweet nightingale wilt thou sing
a soul-soothing melody
to remove love’s sting,
fading for a while this travesty?
Thou hast seen the rain from mine eyes
and knowest the sorrow that dwells inside,
be thou my vision, nightingale of mine,
the balm that heals my heart’s malign.
Gypsy red
Dec.2011
darkness’s inevitability?
Commeth ye who comprehend,
all that begins must come to an end.
Woeful and tasteless life
get thee behind me and my strife,
bothersome thou hath become
with tribulation and affliction.
Sweet nightingale wilt thou sing
a soul-soothing melody
to remove love’s sting,
fading for a while this travesty?
Thou hast seen the rain from mine eyes
and knowest the sorrow that dwells inside,
be thou my vision, nightingale of mine,
the balm that heals my heart’s malign.
Gypsy red
Dec.2011
Published 11th Dec 2011
| Edited 2nd Aug 2012
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14th Dec 2011 2:55pm
17th Dec 2011 4:02pm
I adore these verses so "retro" romantics and melancholics.
I had to work with the dictionary, but it was worth it. What studies have you done to know how to write in Old English?
ps. Gothic and atmospheric music is my favorite.
You are in my list.
I had to work with the dictionary, but it was worth it. What studies have you done to know how to write in Old English?
ps. Gothic and atmospheric music is my favorite.
You are in my list.
17th Dec 2011 4:59pm
I have sent you the info Luca, I love the archaic languages they are far more rich with beautiful words and a larger variety of nuances especially if you are writing artistically such as poetry a Shakespearean or Elizabethan dictionary is wonderfully helpful also reading old manuscripts of such works familiarizes you with the use of such words. Please, feel free to ask if I can help you in any way.Thank you very much for the comment and the following, I am honored.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
4th Mar 2012 3:15am
Perdóname, Espíritu de mi espíritu, porque de esto, que me ha parecido más fácil de leer el misterio, dijo en lágrimas y te entiende mejor en la pena que alegría. Sonya ... usted no tiene idea de cómo se sienten las palabras de mi mente. Os dejo con la necesidad de querer más. Usted está verdaderamente Dios ha enviado. Lo siento si mi español es muy básico, pero el checo hablar más ahora, porque yo soy el único que queda que puede hablar con mis abuelitos grandes. Hago mi mejor. besos
4th Mar 2012 1:52pm
Aunque me considero hija de la luz, hay momentos en que la obscuridad toma dominio en mí, en esas ocasiones tengo que exorcizarlo con bolígrafo y papel para sacarlo de mi interior. No tienes que jamas pedirme disculpa por tu uso del español yo no soy nadie para criticarte y ademas entiendo lo que quieres decirme.Gracias querido amigo por tu generosidad.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
4th Mar 2012 2:25pm
I think that is the most that you have every explained you to I. Yes, what doesn't kill us; only makes us stronger. From what I know you can be Beta Grade Titainium. You are head strong woman. Please take care and be safe. I hope you never run out of pen nor paper. Put those demons to rest. Dave
