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exspell
To exspell memory
cannot be done
it can only be withdrawn
hidden away
from aware
but close to despair
near the edge of reason
were chaos dosent care
cannot be done
it can only be withdrawn
hidden away
from aware
but close to despair
near the edge of reason
were chaos dosent care
Published 11th Dec 2011
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11th Dec 2011 8:23pm
this is just a thought and at no mean i'm i a expert on poems or writing i think it would sound better in line 5 if you would put (awareness)other then aware but other then that i like this good job keep writing
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