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Dormant Passions
I fell in love, not with your eyes, but from
Your caress that was no ripe kiss of mouths,
But a brushed cheek against cheek; for as long
As it left me those feelings that would rouse
The dormant, swirling passions from within
My bosom, there the beating of my heart
Would accelerate. This strengthens the sin
Of reaction, forged in that lesser part
Of valour: indiscretion (in the blush
At the thought of your fucking craving). Wired
Dreams make simple reality. The flush
Of heat affects shallow breathing. It fired
New sentiments I'd remember again,
After you'd gone, to relive love's sweet pain.
Your caress that was no ripe kiss of mouths,
But a brushed cheek against cheek; for as long
As it left me those feelings that would rouse
The dormant, swirling passions from within
My bosom, there the beating of my heart
Would accelerate. This strengthens the sin
Of reaction, forged in that lesser part
Of valour: indiscretion (in the blush
At the thought of your fucking craving). Wired
Dreams make simple reality. The flush
Of heat affects shallow breathing. It fired
New sentiments I'd remember again,
After you'd gone, to relive love's sweet pain.
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Re. Dormant Passions
8th Jul 2019 2:23am
sweet deep write love to brush up next to thy bosom and light the fire within
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Re: Re. Dormant Passions
9th Jul 2019 10:14am
I thrive on the strength of emotions and feelings - I think my verses do too
Re. Dormant Passions
8th Jul 2019 2:59am
"And the sheer flush
Of heat affected my breathing and fired"
Definitely an example of 'not' faking it.
Of heat affected my breathing and fired"
Definitely an example of 'not' faking it.
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Re: Re. Dormant Passions
The faking is for
political charlatans:
Maybe poets fit
This mould like a dove
Fits a dovecote and cuckoos
Fit every nest.
Smiles (thank you)
political charlatans:
Maybe poets fit
This mould like a dove
Fits a dovecote and cuckoos
Fit every nest.
Smiles (thank you)
Re. Dormant Passions
8th Jul 2019 6:16am
Re: Re. Dormant Passions
Memories are hand
made, not manufactured, to
orders in my head
Smiles (thank you)
made, not manufactured, to
orders in my head
Smiles (thank you)
Re. Dormant Passions
8th Jul 2019 7:10am
“New sentiments that I'd remember when
You'd gone: if only to relive falling in love. “
Beautiful imagery here.
You'd gone: if only to relive falling in love. “
Beautiful imagery here.
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Re: Re. Dormant Passions
I love beautiful
imagery painted with
the sleekest of words
Thank you (so much)
imagery painted with
the sleekest of words
Thank you (so much)
Re. Dormant Passions
8th Jul 2019 10:10am
this is when falling in love is a blessing it is a very beautiful thing to have and to behold but the love that lays dormant it holds many sentiments of pure passion and pleasure reopening the heart even deeper love it QUEEN
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Re: Re. Dormant Passions
the passion lies in
the dormancy not in the
eruption of love
Smiles (thank you)
the dormancy not in the
eruption of love
Smiles (thank you)
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9th Jul 2019 12:32pm
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9th Jul 2019 1:17pm
Re. Dormant Passions
Anonymous
8th Jul 2019 3:28pm
Gorgeous ink
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Re: Re. Dormant Passions
I bought it from the
gorgeous ink shop along with
beautiful brushes.
Smiles (thank you)
gorgeous ink shop along with
beautiful brushes.
Smiles (thank you)
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 2:38am
Lol nice !!
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Re. Dormant Passions
8th Jul 2019 9:00pm
"As it left me those feelings that would rouse
The dormant", this is when my mind began to visualize your art. Enjoyable.
The dormant", this is when my mind began to visualize your art. Enjoyable.
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Re: Re. Dormant Passions
Feeling your mind in there,
visualising, is just
as good as sitting
on your face, waiting
for your tardy tongue to do
lovely licky things
Smiles (thank you - mmmm)
visualising, is just
as good as sitting
on your face, waiting
for your tardy tongue to do
lovely licky things
Smiles (thank you - mmmm)