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Pride in pleasure...
Tall, monumental heat takes rise to a formed curve as taut ventricles strain, and reveal his plum colored need.
My tongue skims the length of his heartbeat; root to tip, sampling salted dew before devouring the quiver.
I cast my abiding eyes to watch as his own get heavy-lidded, and turn to beautifully crafted crescent moons.
Our pheromones cling heavily to each breath, while his teeth sink the insignia of eager approval in his lip.
As our raucous sounds infuse the room, it's difficult to discern who is most primed, and oxygen deprived.
My tongue skims the length of his heartbeat; root to tip, sampling salted dew before devouring the quiver.
I cast my abiding eyes to watch as his own get heavy-lidded, and turn to beautifully crafted crescent moons.
Our pheromones cling heavily to each breath, while his teeth sink the insignia of eager approval in his lip.
As our raucous sounds infuse the room, it's difficult to discern who is most primed, and oxygen deprived.
Published 7th Jul 2019
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7th Jul 2019 7:02pm
Builds up to "...it's difficult to discern who is most primed". May be said you got his pride in pleasure!
7th Jul 2019 7:53pm
8th Jul 2019 6:12am
Rhyming:
Pride in pleasure
gets full measure
when at leisure
love's lips treasure!
Pride in pleasure
gets full measure
when at leisure
love's lips treasure!
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8th Jul 2019 1:59am
Bravisima Pandora! Beautifully written feast for all senses. This I find to be a truly selfless passage.
"I cast my abiding eyes to watch as his own get heavy-lidded, and turn to beautifully crafted crescent moons."
The abiding eye assuring that the partners feels pleasure. I hope the same concern is demonstrated for your satisfaction. I am titillated more by the sights, sounds, and scent of giving pleasure.
"I cast my abiding eyes to watch as his own get heavy-lidded, and turn to beautifully crafted crescent moons."
The abiding eye assuring that the partners feels pleasure. I hope the same concern is demonstrated for your satisfaction. I am titillated more by the sights, sounds, and scent of giving pleasure.
8th Jul 2019 1:57am
Thank you for such a beautiful comment! I'm tickled pink you liked it enough to add it....Glad ya felt it too, yay!!!
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7th Jul 2019 11:10pm
This is an excellent piece my dear. Your words tease our senses and imagination as we yearn for the scenery-implied to happen to us. Great work of bringing it to life without the need of being graphic.
8th Jul 2019 2:01am
Thank you for the sweetness, Luna...your comment & add both! I strive to avoid the graphic so I'm glad it presented itself well!!
8th Jul 2019 3:01am
Be careful someone might suffocate.
But on second thought, what could be a better way to go.
But on second thought, what could be a better way to go.
10th Jul 2019 11:37pm
8th Jul 2019 11:27am
Insignia of eager approval...spectacular phrase. Delicious content for such priming.
10th Jul 2019 11:38pm
Thank you! It's always great to have the insignia of your approval on the page.;)
Anonymous
8th Jul 2019 3:25pm
Holy cats, girl...It's the eyes. Always the eyes. Love that you drew that visual so beautifully.
10th Jul 2019 11:39pm
10th Jul 2019 11:48pm
Pandora you say you strive to avoid the graphic so your glad it presented itself well!! your words the way they flow they don't need to be graphic as you can feel it all, sensational.
10th Jul 2019 11:55pm
These are the comments I treasure, truly...if my words effect someone, and especially without vulgarity, I am touched! You've humbled me so.....
11th Jul 2019 00:04am
oh they do so much Pandora, a true Master, Mistress of word, that's why I love DU true artists Masters all in their own unique ways.
23rd Jul 2019 11:10pm
Forgive me, my new friend, for missing this. You truly honor me & I thank you beyond words! Idk if you've just disappeared off radar, but I'm still here & ready to help you with that piece of writing...days went by before reading that message....Big hugs to you, L!!
27th Aug 2019 2:59pm
I can assure you, there were no heavy lids on my part while reading this! You absolutely nailed it, with just the right amount of naughtiness... Brilliant work Pandy!!
1st Sep 2019 00:07am
Thank you ever kindly, David! Your words of praise never fail me. Thank you for the RL add too!! Hugs & surprise, I'm here finally!
1st Sep 2019 12:47pm
It's good to see you here, my word buddy. I'm looking forward to see what new delights you create. Hugs
2nd Sep 2019 3:01am
Hot yet classy. This had me ready for the rising you put into motion with your words. I am most impressed by the scene you play out with clearly painted yet poetic imagery and sensations. Ahhh to be that man.
John
John
3rd Sep 2019 8:09pm
"Hot yet classy"...that's what I love to hear as I strive for it. I do love using imagery immensely, and I may have found someone that can teach me to grasp something even further outside of the box..if not my efforts won't stop, they don't know how. Thanks again, John!
