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I Took Too Much

I took too much
Yet I really needed to
The pain is too great
I just need to get through
 
If I can make it past the night
Then I can hope for tomorrow
But when my body breaks down
It brings me too much sorrow
 
I took too much
Just to numb the ache
One had me doubled over
Left in the pain's wake
 
I feel much softer now
Very relaxed, nice and loose
My words come too easy now
But I could also be that aloof
 
I took too much
But I'm not shameful
I know my limits now and
I no longer feel awful
 
I tested the waters
And they felt just fine
So I won't give a fuck
If you think I had too much wine
 
I took too much
But I didnt overdo it
When you live the life I do
You'll try all kinds of shit
LivDiane
Written by LivDiane
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Lazy write, idgaf. Feel goooood.
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