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4000 YEARS
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4000 YEARS
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
6th Jul 2019
| Edited
9th Jul 2019
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Author's Note
Entry for the #determination visual poem contest.
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#aging
#death
#determination
#haiku
#trees
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Re. 4000 YEARS
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
7th Jul 2019 1:23pm
To survive that long is amazing but it still feels like a sever loss. Nice Haiku.
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Re: Re. 4000 YEARS
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
8th Jul 2019 2:40am
Thanks Josh. I write so many senryu that it's nice to just do a nature haiku.
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Re. 4000 YEARS
cold_fusion
7th Jul 2019 4:23pm
A loss beyond the imagination.
Death
if a true elder.
This left me moved Kumar.
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Re: Re. 4000 YEARS
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
8th Jul 2019 2:41am
Thank you cold_fusion. These trees- they are indescribably beautiful with their swirls and ivory-like wood.
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