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CARAMELIZING
Her peach don’t get too juicy
But man it sure is sweet
The flames do love to lick it
When they’re not tickling my meat
But man it sure is sweet
The flames do love to lick it
When they’re not tickling my meat
Published 3rd Jul 2019
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3rd Jul 2019 6:55pm
3rd Jul 2019 7:04pm
Thanks. Been thinking about whether it is better with "my meat" at the end. What do you think?
3rd Jul 2019 9:01pm
In my opinion, as I am reading, I would go with 'my meat' and that is only because it shows possession of whose meat the poet is speaking in reference too, I do hope I helped somewhat, either way I will enjoy your hard meat from my silken front to the ...mm ... tight rear...wink
