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Liquid Night
Night clubs, movies,
neon signs and rubies,
The stars shined like rhinestones in the sky.
Smooth laughter, cheap perfume
soft lies, electric bloom,
cigarette smoke filled up the room.
Night clubs, movies,
neon signs and rubies,
The stars shined like rhinestones in the sky.
He rode the highway west,
across the border
He left the chaos and disorder
and drifted away in the liquid night.
neon signs and rubies,
The stars shined like rhinestones in the sky.
Smooth laughter, cheap perfume
soft lies, electric bloom,
cigarette smoke filled up the room.
Night clubs, movies,
neon signs and rubies,
The stars shined like rhinestones in the sky.
He rode the highway west,
across the border
He left the chaos and disorder
and drifted away in the liquid night.
Published 3rd Jul 2019
| Edited 30th Jan 2020
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3rd Jul 2019 4:41pm
There is something so voyeuristic about this piece; it pulled me in and held me ready at attention. The repetition is lyrical in nature and wanted me humming some sort of underbellied tune while reading it.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.
3rd Jul 2019 4:45pm
Wow thanks a ton! It has a melody in my head as well! Would you kindly explain to me what general feelings it brings to you? Thank you for reading!
3rd Jul 2019 4:47pm
3rd Jul 2019 4:49pm
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