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Sweet Sin...
Beneath the shadows of night, stardust and blurred streams of frenzied lightning catapult from my oceanic eyes.
As desirous greed builds, our lungs chase tangled air while heaving argot whisperings in between the stolen breaths.
We grasp each other's psyche like the clawing of twisted sheets, bookmarking pages where hunger best unfurled.
From a palette of sweat and saliva, we trace letters of ardor and unholy scriptures; a mosaic of sweet sin coloring our welded form.
A sanguine rhapsody pulses through our veins, dancing us from my clear river rains, straight into his white silkenend sea.
As desirous greed builds, our lungs chase tangled air while heaving argot whisperings in between the stolen breaths.
We grasp each other's psyche like the clawing of twisted sheets, bookmarking pages where hunger best unfurled.
From a palette of sweat and saliva, we trace letters of ardor and unholy scriptures; a mosaic of sweet sin coloring our welded form.
A sanguine rhapsody pulses through our veins, dancing us from my clear river rains, straight into his white silkenend sea.
Published 3rd Jul 2019
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3rd Jul 2019 10:54am
Oh the clawing of twisted sheets ...and what that evokes. Welded forms...to only imagine. Lovely way to play.
3rd Jul 2019 5:39pm
3rd Jul 2019 12:21pm
Beautiful imagery. A couple of reads to really soak in this story of need. Love it.
3rd Jul 2019 5:40pm
Thank you, dearest Eerie, for reading me & leaving such a lovely comment. 🌷
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 1:39pm
Criminy...you just seered some incredible imagery into the screen. I'm pretty sure the images will linger for days...like an afterburn scorch mark. Gorgeous sensuality!
3rd Jul 2019 5:42pm
Thank you, lovely one! You made me smile big! It felt good to finally spit some prose out & I'm gracious that you enjoyed it! 🌷❤
3rd Jul 2019 2:38pm
one awesome hot write eyes blushed at the words blood flowed free racing at apouding pace
3rd Jul 2019 5:45pm
Thanks for being so sweet & adding me, D. I'm humbled, but making your eyes blush makes me giggle...
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3rd Jul 2019 5:48pm
Thank you, kink! I'm so glad...now I need to come read YOU. I decided that I truly needed to get out & read new peeps when finding gems in my competition that I'd never read before. It opened my eyes & now that I'm back, I will!
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3rd Jul 2019 5:50pm
If I get your approval, then I'm stoked! I absolutely agree with your latter comment & I'm happy I could portray it in a spill that was long overdue! Thank you...
Brava Pandora! You unleashed some mastery in this piece. Your metaphors are beautifully complex. You do indeed have "oceanic eyes." The uniqueness of your description of the lover's cocktail is exceptional:
"dancing us from my clear river rains, straight into his white silkenend sea."
You honor the sensations of the transcending nature of sex.
"dancing us from my clear river rains, straight into his white silkenend sea."
You honor the sensations of the transcending nature of sex.
3rd Jul 2019 5:53pm
Aww, you remembered the blues!!
Your compliments & add humbled me so. I'm always honored when you show up. That last part was my favorite too! Thank you so much!
Your compliments & add humbled me so. I'm always honored when you show up. That last part was my favorite too! Thank you so much!
3rd Jul 2019 7:54pm
Pandora you definitely Unleashed fire with that pen... Grade A+ inkage! *hi5* :D
3rd Jul 2019 10:44pm
Hi5 back atcha! Thank you, you swell my ego! 😀 You're the erotic king of the pen though!
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3rd Jul 2019 11:39pm
beautiful Pandora you are at the apex of your writing
so seductive and beautiful is this write
it burns passion...
love lady...
love Brenda 💕
so seductive and beautiful is this write
it burns passion...
love lady...
love Brenda 💕
Thank you so much, Miss wordy one has her words all together & is taking them to the furthest places & well beyond, deserving all the best to come from it !! .;) 🌷💗
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11th Jul 2019 3:28am
ITS BEEN YEARS SINCE WE DID
WHAT U DO NOW
FINALLY OUR LUNGS BURST
NOW FOR LIPS WE THIRST
O LALALLAAA
SINCE AGES SHE DOESN'T TRUST
WHAT U DO NOW
FINALLY OUR LUNGS BURST
NOW FOR LIPS WE THIRST
O LALALLAAA
SINCE AGES SHE DOESN'T TRUST
2nd Sep 2019 2:53am
You are hands down one of the most talented sensual poets I've met. You weave your imagery into a tapestry of passion and imagery which blossoms across the page in resplendent imagery and emotion. I feel like I've taken a trip to a beautiful island when I read you. This is one of my favorites of yours. Subtle, yet dazzling, and filled with the nuances of metaphor which define you a poet whose work I adore.
John
John
