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green

longing love lyrics
verdant verse, venerating --
mere mirage mocks me
brokentitanium
Written by brokentitanium (k.)
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Re. green
3rd Jul 2019 8:26am
Nice alliteration - good form
SweetOblivion
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(k.)
4th Jul 2019 4:14am
Thank you!
brokentitanium
Re. green
(Kumar)
3rd Jul 2019 5:37pm
Fun wordplay!
SatInUGal
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(k.)
4th Jul 2019 4:15am
Yep, it was fun! You would know...
brokentitanium
Re. green
3rd Jul 2019 10:38pm
a green gem.

reminds me of an evergreen Haiku of my favorite poet on DU.

beaut Senryu!
cold_fusion
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(k.)
4th Jul 2019 4:15am
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.
brokentitanium

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