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green

longing love lyrics
verdant verse, venerating --
mere mirage mocks me

Written by brokentitanium

(k.)

Published 3rd Jul 2019

#jealousy #loneliness

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Re. green

3rd Jul 2019 8:26am

Nice alliteration - good form

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4th Jul 2019 4:14am

Thank you!

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Re. green

3rd Jul 2019 5:37pm

Fun wordplay!

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4th Jul 2019 4:15am

Yep, it was fun! You would know...

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Re. green

3rd Jul 2019 10:38pm

a green gem.

reminds me of an evergreen Haiku of my favorite poet on DU.

beaut Senryu!

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4th Jul 2019 4:15am

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

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