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No Time Left
I’d sit and read your letters
I’d cry again
I burned them long ago
Was only way to hold you then
Through paper
I burned them page by page
The plans we made
Another chance to spend together
what life would grant us
Time has ran out
Emperor of maladies
Has taken you from all who love you
Now only delusions
Of what could of been for us
Burning in my mind
I’d cry again
I burned them long ago
Was only way to hold you then
Through paper
I burned them page by page
The plans we made
Another chance to spend together
what life would grant us
Time has ran out
Emperor of maladies
Has taken you from all who love you
Now only delusions
Of what could of been for us
Burning in my mind
Published 29th Jun 2019
Author's Note
Death of a loved one
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30th Jun 2019 00:03am
God, that's a horrible way to lose someone. My heart goes out to you, firstly.
Secondly, holy shit. I don't know what it is about this poem, but I LOVE IT. Maybe the metaphors and concept, the reiteration of burning like it's forever seared in your memory. Excellent, excellent write, mate!
Secondly, holy shit. I don't know what it is about this poem, but I LOVE IT. Maybe the metaphors and concept, the reiteration of burning like it's forever seared in your memory. Excellent, excellent write, mate!
30th Jun 2019 00:25am
Twice i lost someone i loved
the first was my fiancee to some unknown illness
and the 2nd to cancer
I am sorry for Your loss and though a relatable spill
You spilled in a way that unless i read Your notes and #tags i would have thought a different type of loss
Well done
the first was my fiancee to some unknown illness
and the 2nd to cancer
I am sorry for Your loss and though a relatable spill
You spilled in a way that unless i read Your notes and #tags i would have thought a different type of loss
Well done
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
8th Jul 2019 11:44am
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