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vulnerability
morphing and expanding to meet my future
forgotten dreams awaken
will I be a published author? maybe
isn't funny I'm shy all of a sudden
it took me years to get naked on the page
meeting the world nude in my vulnerability
frightens me terribly
I'm taking the plunge
it's now or never
fate has called and I answered
writing is my life
the passion that drives me
excited but scared
what if they love me
and I become famous
worse what if I'm hated
revealing the deepest parts of me
into the unknown, I travel
with nothing but my pen to protect me
I'm being called I can feel it
my psychic ability has never steered me wrong
I believe the world will receive me
a poetic misfit, there must be a place I can shine
here I come ready or not
I'm going to jump with hopes I'll land where I'm supposed to
there is no other way I climbed the mountain
it's time to freefall into the unknown
Author's Note
I'm getting ready to publish my first book ❤
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 8:20pm
Re: Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 8:41pm
Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 8:39pm
This is an exciting development having followed the varied writes over the past year. No time like the present. I believe.
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Re: Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 8:41pm
Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 9:35pm
No Brenda not free fall, but fly the free falling occurred when we metaphorically sacrificed 'us' honing our crafts. Your wings are spread little owl go soar the skies
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Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:31pm
Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 11:09pm
Agreeing with Carpe, you won’t fall, you’ll soar! You’re already taking our breath away, how could you expect any less?❤️
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Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:34pm
Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 11:22pm
Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:35pm
thank you beautiful Sweet One I'm happy to hear you are thinking of publishing as well...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. vulnerability
25th Jun 2019 11:33pm
I would love an autographed copy (I'll pay extra)
I have been reading Your ink for many years now
and am always amazed at Your depth, sensitivity, power and strength.
All this and You are a kind Beautiful spirit
You'll make it - I believe in You
I have been reading Your ink for many years now
and am always amazed at Your depth, sensitivity, power and strength.
All this and You are a kind Beautiful spirit
You'll make it - I believe in You
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Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:36pm
aw thank you dearest Tallen you honor me greatly with your comment I'm blushing... I deeply appreciate your belief in me...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. vulnerability
26th Jun 2019 1:54am
Awesome Brenda! Make sure you are informed of each aspect of the publishing process. It's a wonderful experience. ❤️
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Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:37pm
thank you dearest Daniel I will I'll be involved I'm excited about it...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:38pm
Re. vulnerability
Anonymous
29th Jun 2019 00:02am
You have something(s) to say! I'm glad you're getting ready to publish and wish you the audience you deserve!
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Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:39pm
thank you dearest Skeets I'm making my way there it's been years in the making I'll get there...I deeply appreciate the love here...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. vulnerability
1st Jul 2019 11:40pm
thank you graciously dearest HF I'm excited with bouts of panic but I do think it's time to take that leap...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. vulnerability
3rd Jul 2019 5:27pm
I'm with HF, give me a signed copy! I didn't read this one from the outside so it gave me the biggest smile on this gloomy day. The world IS ready for an epic & genuine misfit like you over some bullshit, hyped up lines from the typical. People need raw & real, your vulnerabilities will be someones blessings. Hell yeah! 🌷❤🌠🥂
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