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And Odysseus Ate
Mysticism flows through tear dripped leaves
psalm sung umbrella
periodic whisper
sails billow
open pliant comb, Homeric passage
weep in woe, thine eye
wave upon wave
with hope dye
a stain preservation, set to stone
love, trust, secure
salient shoulder
without hint of ohms signature
we flow
forward and bold
face to flame envelopes, Faustian fed fire
sold to the journey, written on bone
Published 25th Jun 2019
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25th Jun 2019 1:26pm
25th Jun 2019 6:20pm
25th Jun 2019 6:24pm
Always mate good to see you here and thank you for emailing me. Your the reason I'm back here
25th Jun 2019 6:34pm
I will Always reach out-That door-Forever open to You My Brother!!!
(You'll Always belong here)
(You'll Always belong here)
25th Jun 2019 1:45pm
25th Jun 2019 6:21pm
How Honoured I am to see You here Grand Poetess!!!
It means much to me to have You comment!!!
It means much to me to have You comment!!!
25th Jun 2019 1:55pm
'without hints of ohms signature'...how smooth is the flow ..undying hope & the mystical veins your journey spreads one in verses...beauty as ever Soul! write on :)
25th Jun 2019 6:24pm
Dear Uma, You stroke my ego-Thank You
The flow to me will forever try to marry conveyance with emotive depth, even if in minute word.
The flow to me will forever try to marry conveyance with emotive depth, even if in minute word.
Anonymous
25th Jun 2019 2:23pm
That last line just lingers. Really beautiful when read aloud. I’m glad this was tagged as hope as that definitely the general consensus that comes through.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
25th Jun 2019 6:28pm
It's all about that last line right now ;)
Despite what darkness comes, tis You and other trusted close-ones that help me stay positive.
I am a glass half full type fool-yet trials evaporate at the edges.
Mil/kindness -Precious
Despite what darkness comes, tis You and other trusted close-ones that help me stay positive.
I am a glass half full type fool-yet trials evaporate at the edges.
Mil/kindness -Precious
25th Jun 2019 2:31pm
25th Jun 2019 6:29pm
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25th Jun 2019 3:24pm
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25th Jun 2019 6:32pm
Dear Queen, such Honour when You visit and comment.
You read me so well-Magic in Life, we grab every bit we can holding faith in its truth
So Great to see You here!!!
You read me so well-Magic in Life, we grab every bit we can holding faith in its truth
So Great to see You here!!!
25th Jun 2019 9:36pm
Is this a ghost i see before me 👻
Welcome back, good fellow. and what a write to to come back with
reads very well, love your word choice. type of poem can be read countless times and keeps giving itself each time
*hat tip*
stick around
Welcome back, good fellow. and what a write to to come back with
reads very well, love your word choice. type of poem can be read countless times and keeps giving itself each time
*hat tip*
stick around
26th Jun 2019 11:01am
A ghost for sure :)
Thank You for the welcome back My Brother!!!
I will return shortly (Absolute)
I had hoped this Write conveyed without sounding to corny-I tend to be that way at times lol
Thank You for the welcome back My Brother!!!
I will return shortly (Absolute)
I had hoped this Write conveyed without sounding to corny-I tend to be that way at times lol
