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Traversing the unfathomable mind
Where surreal meets every reality
A threshold between infinity and death
And of translucency and grief
Allow me to commune just once
To the solace ive been longing to keep
Like the air i breathe, i long to be free
Touching without a trace
Yet sustains a life to thee
I shall be the ray of the sun
The Incendiary flame of clarity
As i lluminate a life drenched in mediocity
Let hope spring
In the phetora of each grief
As it masticate all the threaded grit
And like the nature that surrounds me
I will stand still and shackled free
As no affliction could destroy me
(C)mai6.22.19
Where surreal meets every reality
A threshold between infinity and death
And of translucency and grief
Allow me to commune just once
To the solace ive been longing to keep
Like the air i breathe, i long to be free
Touching without a trace
Yet sustains a life to thee
I shall be the ray of the sun
The Incendiary flame of clarity
As i lluminate a life drenched in mediocity
Let hope spring
In the phetora of each grief
As it masticate all the threaded grit
And like the nature that surrounds me
I will stand still and shackled free
As no affliction could destroy me
(C)mai6.22.19
Published 22nd Jun 2019
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22nd Jun 2019 3:11am
You words run true. Yet i feel they are not you. Each verse you traverse seems somewhat forced... You articulate the spoken word with true pasion yet i sense the art of poetry and the spoken word has been acquired, learnt and perfected ... I challenge you with a question ... Who do speak too?
22nd Jun 2019 3:23am
I have no solid background to begin with. I just findwriting interesting so ive joined so many communities in g+. Surprisingly they critique works bases on how they perceived it. I have yet to learn but i am willing.
