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A Rocky Terrain
from the mountain ledge
one sees a golden ball
setting in the distance
a myriad of colours
the dusk sun
ready to sleep
silent music
the end of the day
majestic but mystical
summer heights
one sees a golden ball
setting in the distance
a myriad of colours
the dusk sun
ready to sleep
silent music
the end of the day
majestic but mystical
summer heights
Published 21st Jun 2019
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
21st Jun 2019 9:17pm
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22nd Jun 2019 1:03pm
22nd Jun 2019 2:45am
I felt the sanctity of the Solstice in this, Lozzamus. The essence of feeling blessed.
22nd Jun 2019 1:05pm
Thanks, Ahavati. Took a great deal of effort and cutting out unnecessary words.
22nd Jun 2019 1:18pm
22nd Jun 2019 7:56pm
23rd Jun 2019 11:30pm
The imagery is magnificent L...living near the beach I love watching the sun set into the ocean. As far as I know scientists still cannot fully explain why the sun/moon appear bigger when setting?
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
24th Jun 2019 1:11pm
