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1, Punishment, 2. Discipline
1
You enter the room
I say, “Pull your panties down to your knees
Lift the back of your skirt and tuck it into your belt
Place your elbows on the kitchen table
Place your feet shoulder width apart.
The number today is ten
After each stoke you will say, “Thank you, Sir”
You will raise your ass so that it is the highest point
You will not speak except to thank me.”
You have assumed the position
You hear me approach
A whistling sound, then searing pain
You moan, “Thank you, sir!”
Your ass remains in the proper position
Whoosh! Another incineration almost the same spot
You gasp “Thank you, sir!”
Again and again and again…
When you have ten distinct red stripes
I leave the room
You wipe away your tears
And return to your apartment for the night.
2
I say, “Pull your panties down to your knees
Lift the back of your skirt and tuck it into your belt
Place your elbows on the kitchen table
Place your feet shoulder width apart.
The number today is ten
After each stroke you will say “Thank you, Sir”
You will raise your ass so that it is the highest point
You will not speak except to thank me.”
You have assumed the position
You hear me approach
A whistling sound, then searing pain
You moan, “Thank you, sir!”
Your ass remains in the proper position
I run my finger along the rising welt
My fingers stray gently over your pussy
You shudder
Whoosh! Another incineration almost the same spot
You gasp, “Thank you, Sir”.
Again and again and again…
When you have ten distinct red stripes
I turn you around, hold you and
Kiss away your tears
We walk hand in hand to the bedroom.
You enter the room
I say, “Pull your panties down to your knees
Lift the back of your skirt and tuck it into your belt
Place your elbows on the kitchen table
Place your feet shoulder width apart.
The number today is ten
After each stoke you will say, “Thank you, Sir”
You will raise your ass so that it is the highest point
You will not speak except to thank me.”
You have assumed the position
You hear me approach
A whistling sound, then searing pain
You moan, “Thank you, sir!”
Your ass remains in the proper position
Whoosh! Another incineration almost the same spot
You gasp “Thank you, sir!”
Again and again and again…
When you have ten distinct red stripes
I leave the room
You wipe away your tears
And return to your apartment for the night.
2
I say, “Pull your panties down to your knees
Lift the back of your skirt and tuck it into your belt
Place your elbows on the kitchen table
Place your feet shoulder width apart.
The number today is ten
After each stroke you will say “Thank you, Sir”
You will raise your ass so that it is the highest point
You will not speak except to thank me.”
You have assumed the position
You hear me approach
A whistling sound, then searing pain
You moan, “Thank you, sir!”
Your ass remains in the proper position
I run my finger along the rising welt
My fingers stray gently over your pussy
You shudder
Whoosh! Another incineration almost the same spot
You gasp, “Thank you, Sir”.
Again and again and again…
When you have ten distinct red stripes
I turn you around, hold you and
Kiss away your tears
We walk hand in hand to the bedroom.
Published 20th Jun 2019
Author's Note
Written after a discussion at a Dom's forum about punishment versus discipline in D/s relationships.
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20th Jun 2019 2:58am
Vert nice summary in D/s relationship, it mainly works through cerebral connections, the thrill in not knowing what the Dom would do, yet, trying to push the boundaries.
The beautiful humiliation in submitting unto another will of emotional power, it is liberation, freedom to express oneself and the physical thrill, the euphoric high, within the act of submission itself, no questions asked, the sexual act of inspiring to be under one’s dark thoughts, the sexual deviation makes that kind of bonding relationship work, and many do not know, it is not always person to person, that broad spectrum ranges via phone, computer, trust me I know, and a very informative write, however your narrative are only tip of the iceberg it is not as pretty as your present, there are times when roles become just as blurred. Which involves, trust, honesty, a degree of communization and you must have respect when venturing outside the boundaries. In addition, please clarify your stance in regards to the crossover most of your writes tend to carry at times, such as BD, bondage and discipline; DS, Dominance and submission; and SM, for sadomasochism, I see you blend occasional, such a shame your readers cannot really glimpse into the aberrant mind of a Dom…
The beautiful humiliation in submitting unto another will of emotional power, it is liberation, freedom to express oneself and the physical thrill, the euphoric high, within the act of submission itself, no questions asked, the sexual act of inspiring to be under one’s dark thoughts, the sexual deviation makes that kind of bonding relationship work, and many do not know, it is not always person to person, that broad spectrum ranges via phone, computer, trust me I know, and a very informative write, however your narrative are only tip of the iceberg it is not as pretty as your present, there are times when roles become just as blurred. Which involves, trust, honesty, a degree of communization and you must have respect when venturing outside the boundaries. In addition, please clarify your stance in regards to the crossover most of your writes tend to carry at times, such as BD, bondage and discipline; DS, Dominance and submission; and SM, for sadomasochism, I see you blend occasional, such a shame your readers cannot really glimpse into the aberrant mind of a Dom…
20th Jun 2019 8:47am
These verses recount a path almost classic in the capturing of requirements. Senses and feelings vary unlike the actions that are reinforced through repetition and the creation of ritual so maybe inject the personal touch to add to the mix?
