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Show her how much you care

She waits hour after hour
Just to see that one popup,
That one notification.
She checks your chat every few minutes
Just to see if you read her text yet.
And sometimes you already did.
But then she waits again,
What will your reply be?
Do you even think of her?
Is she in your thought train?
You make her feel like vomit,
Like nothing special.
Feeling like the inside of a tumble dryer
She doesn’t know whether to stay or leave
She’s not doubting your feelings
She can clearly see it
But she isn’t your priority
You love her
But do you really care about her?
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