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Coddiwompling
Rising with the sun of heated desires
I remove the crusty crabbiness from my eyes
clamor to the bowl of let go and release
the past, repast of yesterday
Disliking the clinginess of morning
sweaters I brush off teeth and tongue
in preparation to another vague
destination
I am still neither here nor there
before I make and consume
at least my first
cup of
black morning after sleep elixir
awake - not certain how much –
now time to scribble in my journal
dreams, goals fat with kindness
inkwells dripping in
lust
love
life
& meditation
answers
questions
purposeful reminders
that I need to get off my butt
i tell my spirit Guide
that I will do something
tomorrow
though, I have no idea
what……….
yet
I remove the crusty crabbiness from my eyes
clamor to the bowl of let go and release
the past, repast of yesterday
Disliking the clinginess of morning
sweaters I brush off teeth and tongue
in preparation to another vague
destination
I am still neither here nor there
before I make and consume
at least my first
cup of
black morning after sleep elixir
awake - not certain how much –
now time to scribble in my journal
dreams, goals fat with kindness
inkwells dripping in
lust
love
life
& meditation
answers
questions
purposeful reminders
that I need to get off my butt
i tell my spirit Guide
that I will do something
tomorrow
though, I have no idea
what……….
yet
Published 17th Jun 2019
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2019 7:11am
I will keep this
as a reminder ...
because
it inspires
~Dev
17th Jun 2019 3:30pm
Wow
i hadn't even thought to inspire
delighted to do so now
especially for a kind spirit like You ; )
Honored for the RL add
(even if it's meant as a tag reminder)
thank You, Beautiful Dev
i hadn't even thought to inspire
delighted to do so now
especially for a kind spirit like You ; )
Honored for the RL add
(even if it's meant as a tag reminder)
thank You, Beautiful Dev
Anonymous
17th Jun 2019 5:13pm
Honestly,
you couldn`t have
penned this
any better;
my sentiments
often reach
into the
diverse of verses
you had woven
here; I was
just merely lost
on finding the
words.
I don`t need
to look any further.
Thanks, T`Allen 😉
17th Jun 2019 11:02am
Relate ... Good write ... Just do is as valid as just write ... Bless and love ...
17th Jun 2019 3:31pm
agree
as just think then write then do
thank You kind comments
and Your thoughts, Brother
as just think then write then do
thank You kind comments
and Your thoughts, Brother
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
17th Jun 2019 11:29am
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17th Jun 2019 3:33pm
i think we all can relate
to that line when we first wake up in the morning
and then later when we sit and prepare to
ink something for the journal
and when we think about it
really think about it wherever we are, whatever we are doing
thank You for the kind praise, Beautiful
to that line when we first wake up in the morning
and then later when we sit and prepare to
ink something for the journal
and when we think about it
really think about it wherever we are, whatever we are doing
thank You for the kind praise, Beautiful
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
17th Jun 2019 3:37pm
<< post removed >>
Anonymous
17th Jun 2019 1:42pm
Some days it's just one foot in front of the other...until we have a destination in sight. Movement is everything
17th Jun 2019 3:36pm
Yes!
i feel the same when here in the Deep
(end of the pond -- stop treading water)
i've been waiting for my Guide to tell me
what's the last task but i think because i don't like the new Guide (i had a different Guide in California)
i am having a difficult time hearing
thank You for the read and share
i feel the same when here in the Deep
(end of the pond -- stop treading water)
i've been waiting for my Guide to tell me
what's the last task but i think because i don't like the new Guide (i had a different Guide in California)
i am having a difficult time hearing
thank You for the read and share
17th Jun 2019 7:29pm
"Goals fat with kindness...
that is so you T!" This spill is fantastic baby!!
Love your lil sis!
-Minx -"Sissy"
that is so you T!" This spill is fantastic baby!!
Love your lil sis!
-Minx -"Sissy"
17th Jun 2019 7:35pm
You always know how to cause me to smile --
thank You
& thank You for the kind praise,
Little Sister
Honored for the RL add
thank You
& thank You for the kind praise,
Little Sister
Honored for the RL add
17th Jun 2019 9:57pm
I don't know where you get these amazing poem titles from, Tallen, you must have a Lewis Caroll gene in you.
It takes me at least an hour to 'get going' in the morning so your poem hit a 'companion' nerve :))
It takes me at least an hour to 'get going' in the morning so your poem hit a 'companion' nerve :))
17th Jun 2019 10:07pm
Sometimes the titles are from graphics or memes on Facebook and i think,
"Hey, i like that word." & then i write it down with the definition for a spill later.
Sometimes, the titles work that way - but not always.
It takes my eyes about an hour to get up and going and that's why i should stay away from social media during that hr but well, You, know........i don't.
Love Your comments as always
thank You
and thank You for causing me to smile ; )
"Hey, i like that word." & then i write it down with the definition for a spill later.
Sometimes, the titles work that way - but not always.
It takes my eyes about an hour to get up and going and that's why i should stay away from social media during that hr but well, You, know........i don't.
Love Your comments as always
thank You
and thank You for causing me to smile ; )
