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Under Water
He's weaving my existence through every knot
aligning my body tightly like the Seven Sisters
You'd think Orion could hold me
but I'm dropping
deep
He traces my essence by breathing skin,
fiber reacting to each sweeping touch
Navigating feather-like strokes
taunting me like indecisive brushes
and I'm a wet canvas
Under water
He tracks my senses by the ebbs and flows
of my inside
Whispering sensations are wrecking my defences
I know this game
I never [want to] win
Clams clawing at my nipples,
he cup my breasts as if they could break
This.. Dominance,
preying upon my senses
Shooting bursts of love into my veins
Trust into my core
I'm cared for, without flaws
I'm loved, without limits
I'm taught the boundaries of my designated lane
Pearls between my legs are pulled tighter
and so is his grip
forcing mounting velvet and soft tissue
to open up the dawn of my time.
It's an exploding Supernova
where I'm dancing among Nebulae
Loved like never before
while nails cut into my skin
bobby pins keeping my lips separated
and then he
.. pauses ..
..Holy..Fuck..
I swear the Planets aren't moving
the Universe is taking a breath,
following his move.
He's a Solar system
A Force I'm gravitating towards
Closer by the second
..pause again..
..oh my fucking GOD!..
Softly, he's kissing my eye lids and my temples.
He finds me beautiful; harnessed and sub spaced
My body is all falling Stars and Rising suns.
Electrical pulses create Moons in my mind's eye..
Always scaring me initially
but here I am
begging a predator to break my soul open.
And he smiles while moving down
Eating me alive
"Control me [for fucks sake]!"
Ball flickers around in my mouth
Tell me what I cannot do!
Tell me what I am not allowed to reach!
Edge me!
Over and over
"My GOD, allow me to come, closer to you!"
Desperate, I'm dancing on the fences of Allowance
I'm not a graceful ballerina on stage, here
I'm a tripping [and falling over] whorish Angel
Finding my place, while losing wings,
and building new ones
between waves of needs and demands of releases
It's truly spiritual,
it really is
I'm under water, drowning in my own juices
begging for choking and pain
I'm ready and he's not done
He obliges
I'm deep-throating
Choking
I can't breathe but I take it
I can't move but I weep for it
He pushes me, never beyond my limits.
My whole Being is begging
for more
aligning my body tightly like the Seven Sisters
You'd think Orion could hold me
but I'm dropping
deep
He traces my essence by breathing skin,
fiber reacting to each sweeping touch
Navigating feather-like strokes
taunting me like indecisive brushes
and I'm a wet canvas
Under water
He tracks my senses by the ebbs and flows
of my inside
Whispering sensations are wrecking my defences
I know this game
I never [want to] win
Clams clawing at my nipples,
he cup my breasts as if they could break
This.. Dominance,
preying upon my senses
Shooting bursts of love into my veins
Trust into my core
I'm cared for, without flaws
I'm loved, without limits
I'm taught the boundaries of my designated lane
Pearls between my legs are pulled tighter
and so is his grip
forcing mounting velvet and soft tissue
to open up the dawn of my time.
It's an exploding Supernova
where I'm dancing among Nebulae
Loved like never before
while nails cut into my skin
bobby pins keeping my lips separated
and then he
.. pauses ..
..Holy..Fuck..
I swear the Planets aren't moving
the Universe is taking a breath,
following his move.
He's a Solar system
A Force I'm gravitating towards
Closer by the second
..pause again..
..oh my fucking GOD!..
Softly, he's kissing my eye lids and my temples.
He finds me beautiful; harnessed and sub spaced
My body is all falling Stars and Rising suns.
Electrical pulses create Moons in my mind's eye..
Always scaring me initially
but here I am
begging a predator to break my soul open.
And he smiles while moving down
Eating me alive
"Control me [for fucks sake]!"
Ball flickers around in my mouth
Tell me what I cannot do!
Tell me what I am not allowed to reach!
Edge me!
Over and over
"My GOD, allow me to come, closer to you!"
Desperate, I'm dancing on the fences of Allowance
I'm not a graceful ballerina on stage, here
I'm a tripping [and falling over] whorish Angel
Finding my place, while losing wings,
and building new ones
between waves of needs and demands of releases
It's truly spiritual,
it really is
I'm under water, drowning in my own juices
begging for choking and pain
I'm ready and he's not done
He obliges
I'm deep-throating
Choking
I can't breathe but I take it
I can't move but I weep for it
He pushes me, never beyond my limits.
My whole Being is begging
for more
Published 16th Jun 2019
| Edited 21st Jun 2023
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Anonymous
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16th Jun 2019 8:18pm
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16th Jun 2019 9:03pm
Can I commend you again for your time given? It leaves me honored that you give it. I always layer things, I can never write flat, and I'm unable to be on point, non-dimensional and uncovered in 2D.
I need multifaceted dimensions to fit.
You're great! Thank you, over and over, for your read.
A Dom/sub relationship is what it is. Intimate. Fully communicated. Naked. Beautiful. Serving. Hot. Intense. Genuine.
Although somehow still a temporary relationship, the days dedicated, surely a full on one, but the dynamic is not 24/7 - I'm unsure I would be able to be that. I'm too independent, too self aware, to be told what to do all days of the week 😏
But he has freed me, pushed me to grow, pushed me to become.
I wish a person like that for any one.
I need multifaceted dimensions to fit.
You're great! Thank you, over and over, for your read.
A Dom/sub relationship is what it is. Intimate. Fully communicated. Naked. Beautiful. Serving. Hot. Intense. Genuine.
Although somehow still a temporary relationship, the days dedicated, surely a full on one, but the dynamic is not 24/7 - I'm unsure I would be able to be that. I'm too independent, too self aware, to be told what to do all days of the week 😏
But he has freed me, pushed me to grow, pushed me to become.
I wish a person like that for any one.
Anonymous
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16th Jun 2019 9:08pm
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16th Jun 2019 9:28pm
Fantastic! I do too 😊
And I agree with your view on the dynamic. The sub holds a great deal of power actually. It's a mutual dance.
And I agree with your view on the dynamic. The sub holds a great deal of power actually. It's a mutual dance.
20th Jun 2019 6:28am
Wow whee! What an awesome, beautifully wild ride. The build is mesmerizing. The validation is so comforting and romantic. And you thrilled me to the core with, It's truly spiritual,
it really is "My sentiments exactly. We hear sex spoken of as dirty, devilish, sinful, naughty when its perhaps one of the most naturally soul fortifying experiences available to us mere mortals. Brava!
it really is "My sentiments exactly. We hear sex spoken of as dirty, devilish, sinful, naughty when its perhaps one of the most naturally soul fortifying experiences available to us mere mortals. Brava!
21st Jun 2019 9:58am
<3 Thank you for your read! And I agree to the coat in which we dress this experience. I have really never had a more healthy relationship, really. This is clear communication, it's trust; it's a respect and a commitment. It's fun and exciting, pushing the limits towards growth. It is self realization, self insight and fulfillment. Spiritual and intimate.
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Skye
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Skye
21st Jun 2019 3:01pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
21st Jun 2019 9:43am
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21st Jun 2019 10:00am
Thank you so much for your read and your comment. Well, I did go for emotional outlet and I'm happy it shows! :)
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Skye
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Skye
16th Jul 2019 12:40pm
i legitimately joined this site because of this poem. i wanted to be able to 'like' it and comment on it, and it inspired me to perhaps put my own work up here some day.
Thank you for speaking the words in my head lately that i can't seem to put to pen. ♥
Thank you for speaking the words in my head lately that i can't seem to put to pen. ♥
20th Jul 2019 8:40am
What an honor to bring you to this place! ❤️ Thank you for that incredible compliment! I sincerely hope you enjoy your stay, find your place and share your words! 💗
The experience in itself is hard to make justice; but I tried to bring in the elements which are in play for me during it. It's one of those things that has to be experienced to be fully understood, I gather. This is my small contribution to life changing moments ❤️
The experience in itself is hard to make justice; but I tried to bring in the elements which are in play for me during it. It's one of those things that has to be experienced to be fully understood, I gather. This is my small contribution to life changing moments ❤️
19th Oct 2022 4:17pm
A wonderful masterpiece
Enjoy reading it from different angles
women's perspective
man's perspective
You take us with your piece to live among the roles in that poem, which leads to a feeling of trembling and a desire to play a major role in your poem.
Thank you for the Pleasure you gave us
Enjoy reading it from different angles
women's perspective
man's perspective
You take us with your piece to live among the roles in that poem, which leads to a feeling of trembling and a desire to play a major role in your poem.
Thank you for the Pleasure you gave us
19th Jun 2023 00:19am
Oh this is an honor! Thank you so much for this comment! It is still one of my favorite poems [smiles] and to share the Pleasure, paint scenarios, build a moment of recognition for another person is truly an honor. I am grateful! Thank you!
