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Blue Lotus

   
Coming up from Aswan  
with his catch of fish    
in his woven baskets,    
   
he tacks the course of his    
sleek felucca along the Nile:    
of her kohl-black eyes,    
   
her long, plaited hair,    
the narcotic of blue water lilies,    
   
her blue lotus pose facing both    
the rising, and the setting sun.    
   
The young fisherman    
( with visions of supple petals )    
begs to know    
   
as he sings upward,    
with his lungs filled with love    
and his strong body of desire,    
   
into the lateen sail that reflects    
her soft linen folds that curve    
and catch the crosswind:    
   
What is your name, scented one    
in the smoke that rises from the    
shores of the cataracts,    
   
“where I bring to you my bounty,    
and will appease your appetite!”    
   
He gazes the alluring azure above,    
offering his outstretched,    
sun-drenched, rippling arms,    
   
offering himself as a lover,    
as one would to this goddess.    
   
The youth of his desire    
waiting for her answer to    
fill the triangle of his sail.    
   
Calling out once more    
as he confidently displays    
his gleaming white teeth:    
   
”Ma huwa 'ismuki?”    
 
 
 
 
 
( Sensen, Egyptian Goddess of the Sacred Blue Lotus )
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published
Author's Note
• Ma huwa 'ismuki? = “What is your name?”

• For the “Ode to Venus” comp hosted by Sky_dancer.
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