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You Pompous Ass
Your sarcastic critique
Talking about peasants
Writing above their talent
Rolling of superior eyes
Scoffing outlandishly
Thinking your amongst the elite
Living in the past just a pompous ass
Your perceived finesse
This is the future of the written word
Poetry for the masses
In fact you are a racist a nazi
In the purest sense
Trying to weed out
What is seen as inferior
With scathing words
A sad human being
Holding on to a class system
That should have died
You can’t push back the tide
We are the new ocean of words
Talking about peasants
Writing above their talent
Rolling of superior eyes
Scoffing outlandishly
Thinking your amongst the elite
Living in the past just a pompous ass
Your perceived finesse
This is the future of the written word
Poetry for the masses
In fact you are a racist a nazi
In the purest sense
Trying to weed out
What is seen as inferior
With scathing words
A sad human being
Holding on to a class system
That should have died
You can’t push back the tide
We are the new ocean of words
Published 15th Jun 2019
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15th Jun 2019 10:23am
15th Jun 2019 10:32am
15th Jun 2019 10:54am
Holy! I LOVE this! I really like the uncovered down to point expression, and as your personality dictates - this is an amazing gift of yours.
I also recognize the attitude you despise in this, and agree to certain waves of elitism, pushing new down not fitting the box.
I love your ending, and your last line is outstanding! <3
I also recognize the attitude you despise in this, and agree to certain waves of elitism, pushing new down not fitting the box.
I love your ending, and your last line is outstanding! <3
15th Jun 2019 11:00am
15th Jun 2019 11:27am
15th Jun 2019 1:11pm
What an excellent entry for the pompous poet comp - I especially like the last two lines - attaboy.
15th Jun 2019 1:37pm
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15th Jun 2019 2:22pm
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15th Jun 2019 5:20pm
Well elitism of some poets who think big words should be used and if you don’t understand these words then tough, I write like a child sometimes maybe a little too direct but all the same I express thoughts like any pompous ass poet
Anonymous
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15th Jun 2019 5:22pm
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Some people write clever words perhaps because they can, appealing to fellow wordsmiths. The clever bit is using the words cleverly. I do tend to skip most poems that speak to me in riddles.
Be happy with your style & stick with it.
A good observation Asperger.
Be happy with your style & stick with it.
A good observation Asperger.
11th Apr 2020 2:38pm
It’s my style and it will never change cause if I did try to change I would never write
