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temptation
swirl lips painting ecstasy
a blush of red penetrated
hidden desires peak then speak to me
follow the dark star south to enter nirvana
temptation's door trespassed
tight pleasure zone quickens
hardened intentions push within forbidden sin
sodomize my thoughts
come into me deeply, darkly
with rich undertones of feeling
passions unfurled your fantasy
dip, twirl, plunge...let me feel you
a quick intake of breath
and I'm transported between the living and dead
you escalate your violence on willing flesh
I succumb to your will...broken upon your altar
falling deeper under waves of torture
screaming your name we plummet
pulsating in unison
taken over the brink we spasm
gifting every last bit of our essence
heightened awareness dawns
we are gods of the cosmos
as one we are granted entry
into sins'nation
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 12th Jun 2019
| Edited 13th Jun 2019
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Re. temptation
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12th Jun 2019 9:02pm
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12th Jun 2019 9:05pm
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12th Jun 2019 9:08pm
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12th Jun 2019 9:06pm
Raw but sophisticated, and at the end, witty. You tempt me endlessly, dear Brenda.
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12th Jun 2019 9:09pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Thomas for such a beautiful comment you warmed my heart...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. temptation
12th Jun 2019 9:25pm
OMG! I am so intimidated submitting my first ever, poem, short story...I dunno what its called; I am new to this. I am not a poet like y'all. I LOVED, Loved, LOVED THIS!!!
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 9:38pm
Diva623,
None of us are professionals.
We are here because we found a home and a place we can be free with people who will love and appreciate our outlet without fear and potential repercussions.
Let your pen flow and welcome to DUP
None of us are professionals.
We are here because we found a home and a place we can be free with people who will love and appreciate our outlet without fear and potential repercussions.
Let your pen flow and welcome to DUP
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Re: Re. temptation
12th Jun 2019 9:49pm
welcome beautiful Diva and thank you graciously... I agree with Ragnar just pen your heart's desire you'll be great 💕
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. temptation
Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 9:36pm
Freaking delectably delicious!!
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12th Jun 2019 9:50pm
Re. temptation
12th Jun 2019 10:13pm
"you escalate your violence on willing flesh
I succumb to your will...broken upon your alter
falling deeper under waves of torture "
-and at your alter we shall pray. loved it. well penned.
I succumb to your will...broken upon your alter
falling deeper under waves of torture "
-and at your alter we shall pray. loved it. well penned.
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
12th Jun 2019 11:56pm
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Re: Re. temptation
13th Jun 2019 00:04am
thank you graciously dearest Samael for the love on this write I'm happy it spoke to you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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13th Jun 2019 00:05am
thank you graciously dearest HF always thrilled when you visit...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. temptation
13th Jun 2019 4:21am
"screaming your name we plummet
pulsating in unison
taken over the brink we spasm
gifting every last bit of our essence
heightened awareness dawns
we are gods of the cosmos
as one we are granted entry
into sins'nation
My, my, Brenda. I have no words, just LOVE.
pulsating in unison
taken over the brink we spasm
gifting every last bit of our essence
heightened awareness dawns
we are gods of the cosmos
as one we are granted entry
into sins'nation
My, my, Brenda. I have no words, just LOVE.
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Re: Re. temptation
13th Jun 2019 6:45am
thank you beautiful Liv most graciously for such a beautiful comment gifting me smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. temptation
13th Jun 2019 4:32am
Clever finale. You continue to craft fascinating reads that just flow flawlessly within the theme selected. Stellar, as always.
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Re: Re. temptation
13th Jun 2019 6:46am
thank you most graciously dearest Tender One for the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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13th Jun 2019 6:46am
Re. temptation
13th Jun 2019 6:42am
Nice one Brenda. Keep in mind I rarely find erotic poems satisfactory to my literal hunger, but your work never ceases to amaze me.
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13th Jun 2019 6:48am
thank you graciously dearest Nemo I missed you... I'm happy this worked for you I like to incorporate killer lines mixed with the suggestive not to say I'm opposed to writing porn I do that too... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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13th Jun 2019 10:30pm
Gorgeous spill, crimson. It was all pieced together in such a sexy fashion. That play on sins'nation at the end was perfection;)🖤
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13th Jun 2019 10:42pm
thank you beautiful one I'm so happy you enjoyed this one....I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. temptation
7th Jul 2019 9:15am
Crimsin another wonderful sensual erotic masterpiece
screaming your name we plummet
pulsating in unison
taken over the brink we spasm
gifting every last bit of our essence
Oh yes those moments we have felt at some point and you bring the memories flooding back and we feel it all again. mmmmmmm Thank you
screaming your name we plummet
pulsating in unison
taken over the brink we spasm
gifting every last bit of our essence
Oh yes those moments we have felt at some point and you bring the memories flooding back and we feel it all again. mmmmmmm Thank you
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