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Aloha, Lover...
Stranded in the luscious folds of Pele’s gorgeous locks as this tempest swirls ‘round and within us,
we give no thought to forlorn predicament, tethered by the knowledge that these sacred shores held fast ‘gainst elements of greater magnitude than pounding rain, and greater heat than lovers’ sweat…
faint magma glowing in the distance even now.
Come evening, come morning, come to me in this dark day and night, fluttering 'cross my torso with the grace of Mālolo and rhythmic synchronicity of Mahimahi. I feel the swollen storm inside your elemental touch, your molten rocky soul.
Can you hear the whispers on the gale, imploring us to blow our peaks to pieces, emulating fire goddess,
our crackling sparks dispersed, redolent flowers in a lei?
The storm will fade, and blow last kiss of sand and mist to meet our lips,
her light will revel in our disarray, proclaiming with the day, “Aloha, lover.”
--I make this offering in the style of PandoraUnleashed, an inspiring creator of voluptuous verse;
may she feel my adulation in this spill--
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/345666-sweet-dreams-baby/
we give no thought to forlorn predicament, tethered by the knowledge that these sacred shores held fast ‘gainst elements of greater magnitude than pounding rain, and greater heat than lovers’ sweat…
faint magma glowing in the distance even now.
Come evening, come morning, come to me in this dark day and night, fluttering 'cross my torso with the grace of Mālolo and rhythmic synchronicity of Mahimahi. I feel the swollen storm inside your elemental touch, your molten rocky soul.
Can you hear the whispers on the gale, imploring us to blow our peaks to pieces, emulating fire goddess,
our crackling sparks dispersed, redolent flowers in a lei?
The storm will fade, and blow last kiss of sand and mist to meet our lips,
her light will revel in our disarray, proclaiming with the day, “Aloha, lover.”
--I make this offering in the style of PandoraUnleashed, an inspiring creator of voluptuous verse;
may she feel my adulation in this spill--
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/345666-sweet-dreams-baby/
Published 11th Jun 2019
Author's Note
an entry in the doppelganger DUP oscars comp
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12th Jun 2019 00:19am
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12th Jun 2019 00:44am
This is a fun comp, so thank you! I hope I can do more before the opportunity passes. We'll see!
12th Jun 2019 2:06am
12th Jun 2019 2:05am
Omg!! This is awesome & so humbling, but you've outdone the mere crumbs I throw down! I love this style of writing the most, even though I can't quite nail it, but that old school romance is my favorite to read. This was epic, no vulgarities & hot as hell......
" I feel the swollen storm inside your elemental touch, your molten rocky soul.
Can you hear the whispers on the gale, imploring us to blow our peaks to pieces, emulating fire goddess,
our crackling sparks dispersed, redolent flowers in a lei? "
Holy hell! Thank you, Kumar! This was an honor & may the odds be in your favor, good luck!!
" I feel the swollen storm inside your elemental touch, your molten rocky soul.
Can you hear the whispers on the gale, imploring us to blow our peaks to pieces, emulating fire goddess,
our crackling sparks dispersed, redolent flowers in a lei? "
Holy hell! Thank you, Kumar! This was an honor & may the odds be in your favor, good luck!!
12th Jun 2019 2:21am
12th Jun 2019 2:32am
Well deserved!!! You're a great writer that I need to read more often. It's so hard to keep up with everyone..... my apologies!!
12th Jun 2019 2:33am
Aw, I’m hit or miss as I tend not to discard much. Thank you for the kind words.
12th Jun 2019 6:52am
'Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery' they say. Good tribute to Pandora and I agree with her comments. I also liked (before I chanced to read said comment) the lines starting "I feel the swollen storm inside..."
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