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innocence
sodden misery bled seminal fluid
an open wound penetrated by you
god over my heart how I ache
until you came into my hidden places--
the touch and feel of you...your smell
and when you kiss me
I die a thousand deaths on your alter of sin
passion beyond the depth of thought
you are the pneuma I'm unable to fathom
how you enter my sanctuary and undress my soul
strip it bear until there is nowhere left to hide
the tiny bits of my bone and flesh who wish to remain secret
uncovered one by one...they were made for you
handcrafted by the gods themselves for your hands
you come gently in and know me
in the way, only a man and a woman can
you come into me and I am whole
tenderly you caress my soul
I see my reflection in your eyes and I am beautiful
so delicate a creature I shimmer
you have reverence here this place is sacred
laying your gifts on the alter...you say prayers to my sin
the darkness knows you
it hovers over my eternal pools... smoke
your prayers send it to the heavens
my spirit renewed by your touch
then and only then do you release your passion
deep within my innocence
my inner goddess has been waiting for you for eons
deity over the hidden realms with stars in your eyes
I'm finally home...my God...in your arms
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 9th Jun 2019
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Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 7:04pm
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9th Jun 2019 7:06pm
Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 8:15pm
Re: Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 8:33pm
thank you graciously dearest Magic One for the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 8:36pm
This is some of your finest writing Crim, Excellent throughout, very tangible and emotive. Wonderful. :)
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Re: Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 8:37pm
aw thank you graciously beautiful Magdalena you made my week with your lovely comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. innocence
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9th Jun 2019 8:59pm
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Re: Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 9:01pm
Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 9:41pm
"...you enter my sanctuary and undress my soul" beautiful imagery Brenda! Softly erotic, sweet and a little darkly rich to taste. I like it!
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 11:08pm
thank you graciously for the love on this write... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. innocence
10th Jun 2019 4:44pm
Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 10:48pm
Re: Re. innocence
9th Jun 2019 11:08pm
Re. innocence
11th Jun 2019 4:48am
Crim, it's no secret how much I enjoy reading you. You draw a reader in quickly with your emotion & passion oozes from your depth. I'm glad you brought this into the comp, plus i had to take it with me. Bunches of ❤
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Re: Re. innocence
11th Jun 2019 4:50am
aw thank you from my heart beautiful one I'm smiling wide here you brightened my night...
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹💕🌹💕
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹💕🌹💕
Re. innocence
11th Jun 2019 4:54am
absolutely mesmerizing delivery of this...tjis unfathomable love ....this drawing touching healing ..n then the ritualistic entry of the fusing One the Soul's Priest of Love...ahh..the liberating eternity in the felt God ..juz Wordless how you deliver this ..a pureform love in birth ..in rebirths ever this ritual this worship of love .bliss n blessed by this read dear Soulful Poetess... Deep Salutations & Bows xx
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Re: Re. innocence
11th Jun 2019 4:57am
aw thank you beautiful Uma you honor me greatly I'm both beaming and humbled by your comment...I deeply appreciate the love you've shown this write...
love Brenda 💕❤💕❤
love Brenda 💕❤💕❤
Re. innocence
11th Jun 2019 9:36am
wow - you really are a vortex of intersecting worlds!
there are gems in every stanza
'until you came into my hidden places-- '
'I die a thousand deaths on your alter of sin '
'how you enter my sanctuary and undress my soul '
...
you weave gentle moments into voracious storms!
there are gems in every stanza
'until you came into my hidden places-- '
'I die a thousand deaths on your alter of sin '
'how you enter my sanctuary and undress my soul '
...
you weave gentle moments into voracious storms!
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Re: Re. innocence
12th Jun 2019 4:12pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for a beautiful and most thoughtful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. innocence
11th Jun 2019 6:17pm
That's great - a true ode to passion!
My favourite line: "passion beyond the depth of thought"
My favourite line: "passion beyond the depth of thought"
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Re: Re. innocence
12th Jun 2019 4:13pm
thank you most graciously dearest poet for the love on this write...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
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Re: Re. innocence
12th Jun 2019 4:14pm
aw thank you most graciously dearest HF for the ultimate compliment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. innocence
7th Jul 2019 9:40am
tenderly you caress my soul
I see my reflection in your eyes and I am beautiful
so delicate a creature I shimmer
The eyes are the windows to the soul so they say, to see it at that moment, then you truly see the beauty of you inside.
Another masterpiece Brenda were your words pull us in and we feel it
I see my reflection in your eyes and I am beautiful
so delicate a creature I shimmer
The eyes are the windows to the soul so they say, to see it at that moment, then you truly see the beauty of you inside.
Another masterpiece Brenda were your words pull us in and we feel it
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Re: Re. innocence
7th Jul 2019 5:11pm
thank you graciously dearest poet I'm happy you're feeling me means a lot to me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹