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My need and My pain

Be under no doubt
A cold punch to my soul
With each criticism you gave
Came yet another crack, deeper than before

A cold punch to my soul
As I fall, again and again
Came yet another crack, deeper than before
 I fall on upon the killing floor

As I fall, again and again
I scream out your name
I fall on upon the killing floor
You walk away, wanting my love no more

I scream out your name
From the darkness of shame
You walk away, wanting my love no more
Taking my words with you



Written by blue2u (Bizarre Vendetta)
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