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Atavistic
We stood there naked, atavistic
Heartbeats beating like the drums
Dancing around the fire
Alone
Just like everyone else
Heartbeats beating like the drums
Dancing around the fire
Alone
Just like everyone else
Published 7th Jun 2019
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8th Jun 2019 00:55am
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8th Jun 2019 7:36pm
8th Jun 2019 7:23am
A lot can be said between eyes that share longing glances around a bonfire... and not too many words !
I like that word... ‘atavistic’ as it’s gorgeously deep, in meaning; ancestrally... 🔥🔥🔥
I like that word... ‘atavistic’ as it’s gorgeously deep, in meaning; ancestrally... 🔥🔥🔥
8th Jun 2019 7:38pm
8th Jun 2019 7:46am
Echo Shadow Starzz. Something about going back to the primitive is evoked. Mankind discovered fire before fashion 'sense'.
8th Jun 2019 7:39pm
