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Out of the Dark
I was only able to
survive the darkness
because the light inside
turned out to still be
bright enough to guide me
on my way out
and it was me who
decided to follow it
survive the darkness
because the light inside
turned out to still be
bright enough to guide me
on my way out
and it was me who
decided to follow it
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- Edited 14th Jun 2019 12:45pm
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7th Jun 2019 2:56pm
Re. Out of the Dark
7th Jun 2019 6:21pm
I like the two-stage 'process' here - first being aware of the light inside, and second the decision to follow it (which no doubt involves some risk and a test of 'faith')
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7th Jun 2019 8:21pm
Yes, thank you! It does take more courage to actually take the leap of faith... But all is well that ends well I guess. :-)
I appreciate your deep understanding of the poem and the meaning of its layout.
Delanee.
I appreciate your deep understanding of the poem and the meaning of its layout.
Delanee.
Re. Out of the Dark
8th Jun 2019 8:49pm
so very beautiful and wise lovely Delanee
you have such a gentle spirit it's so glorious...
love Brenda 💕
you have such a gentle spirit it's so glorious...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. Out of the Dark
9th Jun 2019 1:31am
Thank you so very kindly, dear Brenda! That is the sweetest compliment.
Delanee.
Delanee.
Re. Out of the Dark
9th Jun 2019 1:36am
We are not damsels in distress-
no one can save us except our self.
Very good, delanee. Much enjoyed.
no one can save us except our self.
Very good, delanee. Much enjoyed.
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9th Jun 2019 12:07pm
Re. Out of the Dark
9th Jun 2019 7:56pm
Re: Re. Out of the Dark
9th Jun 2019 10:13pm
I am happy to hear that. And I hope you have found your way back out of the dark. :-)
Thank you for visiting.
Delanee.
Thank you for visiting.
Delanee.