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Worth Your Time
Tresses transverse across time
my mind, dangling and dilated
in the look of your eye
I am but a desert of desire
raging hot, consumed by fire
craving your oxygen to glow
if only, I could feel you blow
graced, your lips
upon my dalliance
catch me and my embrace,
my mood, your food
our sustinence for life
amid romance in moonlight
that stumbles as we fall
the howls are heard all night
my mind, dangling and dilated
in the look of your eye
I am but a desert of desire
raging hot, consumed by fire
craving your oxygen to glow
if only, I could feel you blow
graced, your lips
upon my dalliance
catch me and my embrace,
my mood, your food
our sustinence for life
amid romance in moonlight
that stumbles as we fall
the howls are heard all night
Published 5th Jun 2019
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2019 6:36pm
Oooph...that one packs a punch! That second stanza had me breathless. The ending...sweet hell...
5th Jun 2019 8:50pm
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6th Jun 2019 3:36am
“Worth your time...” to revel in a shared howl is definitely a deliciously lovely thing !
Oh. Your write reminded me of this track — >
https://youtu.be/mUai5ZAwnjc
Oh. Your write reminded me of this track — >
https://youtu.be/mUai5ZAwnjc
6th Jun 2019 4:29pm
Anonymous
6th Jun 2019 3:38am
Gosh, talk about wild... that last line clinched it all. :)
6th Jun 2019 4:39pm
Anonymous
6th Jun 2019 6:29am
you had me at ...``tresses``, luv ❤
6th Jun 2019 4:40pm
Anonymous
6th Jun 2019 5:14pm
Ooh ... 😈
7th Jun 2019 8:41am
Wrigley with such passion! ( I typed written ) computer much be thinking of Wrigley field!!! LOL
7th Jun 2019 2:16pm
