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[ CC ] Of The Naked Girl

barely leaning lazily---
her bare backside against      
a poplar tree occupied      
by birds counting two -      
loving doves, I believe      
by the sound of coo;      
I spied the lady, nude      
raptured in reverie --- she        
being no one in particular      
spoke to me without words      
       
I, being of mind to (re)create      
captured with precision that gal      
going about this exhibitionist swoon      
minus hard wood at her soft behind      
or those little feathered friends in love      
or moon and sun likewise perched above      
skied high up until noon      
       
because I could;      
that's what I oft have done      
and continue to do      
       
Thus, during my visit begun      
as an audience of one      
I drew, preferring to draw      
what I see as it was when I saw      
with my very own eyes      
without thinking, nor did I think      
she would mind being drawn      
       
And there on the lawn sketched in    
leaves browned and grass greened    
was another lass, naked, leaned       
ass against another poplar tree      
preoccupied by another pair of doves      
continually shrinking      
       
And without a shadow of doubt      
I knew each was the other      
going about in their swoon      
being no one in particular      
raptured in reverie up until noon      
       
speaking softly to a moon      
barely yet slowly blinking      
       
captured oftly by the sun      
unthinking  
 
 
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 27th Oct 2021
Author's Note
for the "When Dark Doves Fly" competition @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10828/

inspired by the poem "Of The Dark Doves" by Federico Garcia Lorca @
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/89728/of-the-dark-doves

drawing by some guy oddly named JAM
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